Talk:Proof of Heaven
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Latest comment: 5 months ago by Dkistheedge in topic Second part of introduction?
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Language heavily favours sceptics
editI'm going to be fixing part of this because the page uses words like "notes" and others to lend weight to the skeptics. Tiggy The Terrible (talk) 08:55, 1 April 2022 (UTC)
- Hey @Black Kite:, could you tell me which specific parts you had problems with and which were the weasel words? As far as I can tell, I've removed several weasel words like 'noted' from the page. Tiggy The Terrible (talk) 11:38, 1 April 2022 (UTC)
- WP:CLAIM is the main issue, I think. Black Kite (talk) 11:56, 1 April 2022 (UTC)
- Hey @Black Kite:, could you tell me which specific parts you had problems with and which were the weasel words? As far as I can tell, I've removed several weasel words like 'noted' from the page. Tiggy The Terrible (talk) 11:38, 1 April 2022 (UTC)
Second part of introduction?
editThe second part contains no source and is written with very flawed grammar. Feels almost like something written by someone connected to the author? Dkistheedge (talk) 20:53, 18 May 2024 (UTC)