Talk:The Riddler's Revenge
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Latest comment: 10 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:49, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
Comments
- Many other of these articles have the name of the ride in italics, why does this start differently?
- "located at... located in" is repetitive.
- Link "inversions" the first time round in the lead.
- "approximately 3 minutes." -> three.
- "eleventh roller coaster[1] on April 4, 1998,[2]" for the sake of better looking prose, put ref [1] after the 1998,
- "which opened exactly one year prior.[9] The opening of " repetitive.
- "on the 3 minute" three-minute.
- Put page numbers in the PDF refs, along with format=pdf.
I'll put it on-hold for a week or so while these minor issues are addressed. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:26, 28 August 2013 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Done Themeparkgc Talk 04:13, 29 August 2013 (UTC)
- Should the title of the article therefore be The Riddler's Revenge not just Riddler's Revenge as you currently have it? The Rambling Man (talk) 08:03, 29 August 2013 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Yes. I just tried to move it myself but there is a redirect in the way. As you are an administrator, would you mind moving it? Otherwise I'll just tag it with {{db-move}}. Themeparkgc Talk 08:43, 29 August 2013 (UTC)
- I've done that move, I'll take one final look at the article shortly. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:58, 29 August 2013 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Yes. I just tried to move it myself but there is a redirect in the way. As you are an administrator, would you mind moving it? Otherwise I'll just tag it with {{db-move}}. Themeparkgc Talk 08:43, 29 August 2013 (UTC)
- Should the title of the article therefore be The Riddler's Revenge not just Riddler's Revenge as you currently have it? The Rambling Man (talk) 08:03, 29 August 2013 (UTC)