Talk:Sally James (presenter)/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by BennyOnTheLoose in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:08, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- Avoid starting every paragraph with "In [year]".
- Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
- "she was the music editor, and was a member of" → "she was a member and music editor of"
- I've re-organised the lead slightly, to take the music editor role up into the first para. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
- Dr No → Dr. No
- "Jo Mercer, woman" → "Jo Mercer, a woman"
- Remove the comma after "converted houses".
- Remove the comma after "in 1980".
- Remove the comma after "as children".
- Amended as per the five points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
- With this example, improve the filmography tables.
- Make the tables sortable.
- Add "!scope=row" for every film/tv title.
- Sort each role by last name.
- Sort titles (The Wind Blew Her Away should sort as Wind Blew Her Away, The)
- Finally, center references.
- Done. (Hopefully.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
- The scope rows need a bit of work. See Francesca Gonshaw#Credits as a good example. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:11, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
- Ah. Hopefully OK now, Some Dude From North Carolina. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:26, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
- The scope rows need a bit of work. See Francesca Gonshaw#Credits as a good example. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:11, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
- #Discography is largely unsourced.
- Removed unsourced entries. (After failing to find reliable sources.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
- #Bibliography is kinda short so maybe merge it into #Career.
- Deleted section as book is already mentioned in the body of the article. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
- Properly cite sources.
- Added some details, not sure whether more is required. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
- Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:11, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
- Many thanks for undertaking the review, Some Dude From North Carolina. Hopefully I've addressed everything above. Let me know about anything else that is needed. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)