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UN Charter

Latest comment: 18 years ago3 comments3 people in discussion

Wasn't the UN Charter actually signed in Marin County and not the actual city of San Francisco?66.126.191.98 19:43, 22 August 2006 (UTC)

I don't know. Do you have a reference? According to the United Nations Charter page on the UN website:

The Charter of the United Nations was signed on 26 June 1945, in San Francisco, at the conclusion of the United Nations Conference on International Organization, and came into force on 24 October 1945. The Statute of the International Court of Justice is an integral part of the Charter.

--Paul 18:20, 24 August 2006 (UTC)

The international conference which produced the UN Charter started off with a tribute to the recently deceased FDR in Muir Woods in Marin County. Several weeks later, the document itself was signed in the Herbst Theater in the San Francisco War Memorial and Performing Arts Center complex.--DaveOinSF 17:34, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
That's what I was thinking of. Thanks for the clarification.

Peer Review Requested

Latest comment: 18 years ago2 comments2 people in discussion

I have requested Peer Review of this article to gather suggestions for improvement so it can pass Featured Article nomination the next time. Please see Wikipedia:Peer review/San Francisco, California/archive1 for the discussion. --Paul 18:33, 21 August 2006 (UTC)*July 2003 – August 2006

The following discussion is an archived debate of the proposal. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the debate was no consensus for move. Joelito (talk) 14:51, 30 August 2006 (UTC)

Requested Move: San Francisco, California -> San Francisco

Latest comment: 18 years ago97 comments30 people in discussion

San Francisco, California → San Francisco – WP:NC(CN); World famous city. --Serge 18:04, 24 August 2006 (UTC)

List of reasons to move

  1. San Francisco, like Paris, London, Montreal, and U.S. cities like Chicago, New York City, is well known... no need to specify the state.
  2. World famous cities in the U.S. should be treated no differently from world famous cities outside of the U.S. (Paris, London, Montreal, etc.): use the city name for the article title, period.
  3. All articles in Wikipedia should follow the Wikipedia naming conventions for common names, which dictate that San Francisco (alone) be the title of this article; there is no reason that cities, and San Francisco in particular, should be an exception to these rules.
  4. Professional encyclopedias, both published and online, typically do not "pre-disambiguate"... neither should we.
  5. Chance for confusion with anything else named San Francisco is minimal.
  6. The name of San Francisco alone redirects directly to here, therefore there are no known significant disambiguation issues, and no reason to disambiguate.
  7. Lesser known San Francisco articles are already handled on San Francisco (disambiguation).
  8. Waiting to change the city, state convention does not make sense, since it is a chicken-egg situation. The only way to start to change the convention is one article at a time, like Chicago and this one. Edit: If you have a poll of "the editors", the gang members argue there is a convention (city, name) and it should be followed consistently. If you try to change city names one at a time, they argue you should have a poll to change the convention first (see Survey below for gang members trying to do this).
  9. San Francisco, California is part of a mailing address, not the name of the city. The name of the city is San Francisco; that should be the name of the article.
  10. The one piece of information that the title is supposed to clearly specify is the most common name used to refer to the subject of the article. The current title is unclear on this point... is the most common name San Francisco or San Francisco, California? Titles that use the city, state "comma naming convention" make it impossible for the reader to know. It is our job as editors to make this clear, not ambiguous.
  11. Following a convention that pollutes the article title for readers (by making the common name unclear) in order to supposedly make life easier for editors, violates the overall principle of Wikipedia's naming conventions:
Names of Wikipedia articles should be optimized for readers over editors; and for a general audience over specialists.

Survey

Add "* Support" or "* Oppose" followed by an optional one-sentence explanation (and/or reference numbers from the above reason list), then sign your opinion with --~~~~.

  • Support good reasoning to change the name. I also don't think that a naming convention that is not followed for any of the other countries is a good reason not to do so. And finally the too early to vote comment belongs in the discussion section not here. --Edgelord 18:16, 24 August 2006 (UTC)
Because it is a major city so it is already well-known without specifying the state it is in. Moving minor cities that have ambiguity issues with major cities is not what is being advocated here. Those other cities do need to be disambiguated. --Polaron | Talk 04:55, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
What does Paris, Texas have to do with this move? You even stated yourself that San Francisco is a major city. Are you confusing this with a move from San Francisco to San Francisco, California? --Yath 05:06, 25 August 2006 (UTC)

Discussion

Results

As of this date & time the results are 14 in favor and 15 opposed or wanting to wait. I say we close this up, move it to the Discussion Archive and get on with real work. None of this chatter has helped the San Franciso (, California) page one bit.--Paul 01:37, 29 August 2006 (UTC)

Vote Stacking?

Is it just me, or is it that all but two editors that voted to "support" this name change (and none by those that oppose) have been notified by Serge to vote? I'm just remarking on an interesting observation. --physicq210 02:15, 25 August 2006 (UTC)

Your eyes do not deceive you. 8 out of 10 'support' votes have been solicited by Serge & none of them have made any edits to the San Francisco, California page. I wonder if we can hire Seven Samuri to save us? --Paul 02:31, 25 August 2006 (UTC)

Read the following entry:

Votestacking is sending mass talk messages out to editors who are on the record with a specific opinion and informing them of an upcoming vote, such as via a userbox or other user categorization. In the case of a re-consideration of a previous debate (such as a "no consensus" result on an AFD or CFD), it is similarly unacceptable to send mass talk messages to editors that expressed only a particular viewpoint on the previous debate, such as only "Keep" voters or only "Delete" voters. Emphasis added.

Quoted from Wikipedia:Spam#Votestacking. Dispute freely, but votestacking is what I am seeing in this so-called "survey." --physicq210 02:47, 25 August 2006 (UTC)

Will Beback already brought this policy to my attention. But thanks... --Serge 03:50, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
Then perhaps this poll has been tainted to such a point where it is rendered null and void? --physicq210 03:53, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
Relax. The survey is barely a few hours old and I stopped notifying anyone (as soon as Will told me about the policy). Anyway, what exactly is a "mass talk message"? I made multiple single messages on a few individual users' talk pages... but I did not use a "mass talk message", so far as I know. But, again, I'm not even sure what that is. --Serge 04:00, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
"Mass talk messages" means sending the same message to multiple people. --physicq210 04:02, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
It wasn't a "mass talk message", it was a "friendly notice", per Wikipedia:Spam#Friendly_notice:

If there are a small handful of editors who share your taste and/or philosophy, it is sometimes acceptable to contact them with regard to a specific issue as long as it does not become disruptive. This is more acceptable if they have made an unsolicited request to be kept informed, and absolutely unacceptable if they have asked you to stop.


Also, Wikipedia:Spam#If_you_canvass:

...

If you canvass
The following guidelines for cross-posting have wide acceptance among Wikipedians:

  • Clean up your mess. For example, after engaging in cross-posting to promote some election, be sure to remove those cross-posts after the election is complete.
  • Be open. Don't make cross-posts that initially appear to be individual messages.
  • Be polite. Wikiquette issues are extra-important when a message is likely to be read by many people.
  • Avoid redundancy. Rather than copying the same five page essay to twenty talk pages, write it once, in the place where it is most relevant, and then link to it.
  • Don't use a bot. If you're not willing to spend the time personally sending the messages, don't force us to spend the time reading it (or throwing it away).
  • Don't attempt to sway consensus by encouraging participation in a discussion by people that you already know have a certain point of view.
For each point...
  • I don't think I've created a mess, but am willing to "clean up".
  • I think my short FYI messages were pretty open.
  • Certainly polite. I even said thank you.
  • My "essay" was on this page, and all I cross-posted was a short message and a link.
  • Didn't use a bot. Was willing to spend the time to personally leave messages on each person's Talk page.
  • Well, I didn't attempt to "sway consensus" as much as I simply wanted to inform those that voted on Chicago about the vote on San Francisco.
Anyway, the point is regardless of whether "canvassing" is acceptable or not, I've stopped, and there is nothing that says poll results "tainted" by canvassing are null and void. --Serge 04:20, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
We do thank you for realizing the potential consequences of such behavior. We do thank you for stopping. Above all, we thank you for being polite. However, these are not considered "friendly notices" because they were selective notices. All of the editors who received such notices voted in support, and all of them have not made even one edit on this article. Especially sticky is that you seemed top have notified everyone who supported the move in the Chicago article, and did not notify anyone who opposed the move. Apparently, these actions do not qualify as not attempting to sway consensus. The integrity of this vote has already been compromised in its early stages, and therefore cannot be viewed as "consensus." --physicq210 04:35, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
So, yes, it is a "mass talk message." --physicq210 04:55, 25 August 2006 (UTC)

So you're sure that none of the people notified would have voted for the entire duration that this poll would be open if they hadn't been notified? And you're probably right that reverting vandalism every now and then and fixing statistics doesn't count as editing. It's very early in the poll and it's not like it was stacked to overturn an emerging choice. --Polaron | Talk 04:32, 25 August 2006 (UTC)

Phyiscq210, there were 17 votes in support of moving to Chicago, and 3 opposed. I notified 8 or 9 of the supporters and one of the opposed (User:Will Beback) before I stopped. I only had two more of those opposed to reach, and both of them (User:Vegaswikian and User:Blankverse) voted here without getting notification from me. --Serge 05:12, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
You're right. I stand corrected. I apologize for my mistake. --physicq210 05:14, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
No problem. Anyway, I learned an important lesson today. Also, one very cool thing about Wikipedia is the relatively high ratio of reasonable to unreasonable people (thanks to folks like you and Will and Yours Truly, if I may), this naming convention issue notwithstanding! --Serge 05:26, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
Reasonable and unreasonable...hm. Which side am I on? Your statement is ambiguous. --physicq210 05:35, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
No, it's not ambiguous. I said thanks to folks like you the reasonable to unreasonable ratio is high, which implies you're in the numerator... (otherwise, it would be no thanks to you the ratio is high...). --Serge 05:42, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
Dude, chill. No need for such hostility. But now I get what you mean. --physicq210 05:43, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
Chill? Hostility? I just explained why the previous statement was not ambiguous. I'm sorry if hostility was conveyed, but I assure you none was intended or felt. --Serge 17:24, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
This vote might as well be nullified! I would consider this straw poll void in the case of "vote stacking". I strongly support disregarding this poll, for stacking the votes, by only informing people in favor of your view of its occurence, might as well qualify as it not reflecting the views of the community, but the views of select people who sypathise with one party. Ericsaindon2 05:22, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
You might want to read this entire section and edit your comment accordingly. At this point 100% (3 out of 3) of those who were opposed to moving Chicago, Illinois to Chicago are aware of this poll and have voted here, while only about half (9 out of 17) of those who supported the move have been notified. --Serge 05:26, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
I agree with Serge here, despite my differences with him. I was merely pointing out my observations, not jumping to conclusions. --physicq210 05:33, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
Unfortunately, canvassing was involved in the Chicago poll as well. -Will Beback 05:42, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
I do not care how many people were involved, whether it be 3 or 300, that is still vote stacking or canvassing. I have been involved in a lot of controversies in my day, and not once have I ever vote stacked in my favor, which I probably could have to gain consensus. Does that mean I may go out, and find 10 people or so that would agree to oppose with this move? If I did that, I am sure you would consider it a void poll right then and there, so I would not do it.
It is kind of like if I did this. Say myself and another opponent were running for president. But only the people that were in favor of me knew when the election was taking place, and everyone else was blindsided. However, the other opponent was a more liked candidate, and probably would have won in a fair election. Would that fly in any modern day society? No, so why should it be accepted here? Ericsaindon2 05:59, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
Not once have you ever vote stacked in your favor, Eric? Oh please. Do the words, "I would appreciate it if you would vote to oppose the merge" sound familiar to you? They should, as these vote canvassing words are yours from my talk page!

Hi:Merge Vote

Hello, I noticed that you are active once again in the Anaheim Hills debate. Well, now they are venting their anger out on me by trying to get two community articles to be merged to this one. Both articles are far larger than most community articles are, and it appears to be an effort of venting their anger out on me (for I vastly created the two articles). I would appreciate it if you would vote to oppose the merge, for both articles are 5 paragraphs, and are by no means "stubs". I am sick of these admins picking on all of us for disagreeing with us on the naming convention. Once they loose one case, they find something else wrong. It is getting tiresome and needs to stop. So please show a vote for opposition. Thanks. Ericsaindon2 01:19, 21 August 2006 (UTC)

So give me a break already. I didn't do anything so out of the ordinary. I obviously had no idea that what I was doing was even frowned upon... and now you're all High and Mighty, after you did the exact same thing? Too much! --Serge 06:17, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
Your example is not adequate. You were actively involved in the Anaheim Hills debate long before that encounter. But what you did is you told people who were not even interested or involved in the debate to vote in your favor. It is different when someone has been involved all along and has stated their particular beliefs on the current issue already before you approach them. It is another to just contact people who have never been involved in the debate, and ask them to vote, which is what you did. Again, I do not want to get into an argument with you, I just want you to realize that these actions can result in a void straw poll, and have many times. I do like your ideas, and think the convention is not as good as it can be, but it would be much more effective to do it on a larger scale rather than city-by-city. I see you have only accomplished naming 2 cities out of 42,000+. Your effort would be better spent comprising a large discussion and straw poll to change the overall convention. Ericsaindon2 10:10, 25 August 2006 (UTC)

It is very confusing and highly unfortunate that the Wikipedia has no single place to 'advertise' various surveys, strawpolls, and discussions. To see where you might want to post messages, look at the "What links here" for Wikipedia:Communities strawpoll. I've already placed a notice for this survey at the California WikiProject. BlankVerse 08:12, 25 August 2006 (UTC)

Individual polls vs. collective polls

If we're going to change the titles of a bunch of cities (Boston, Chicago, San Francisco, Seattle, etc.), why don't we just change them with one poll instead of having numerous surveys scattered amongst the articles? They all aim for the same thing, using the same exact reasons. --physicq210 04:31, 26 August 2006 (UTC)

Because the circumstances are different in each case. Some cities are better known than others. Some names are more ambiguous than others. -- Chris j wood 10:04, 26 August 2006 (UTC)
How are the circumstances different for Boston, Chicago, San Francisco, and Seattle? --physicq210 17:34, 26 August 2006 (UTC)
Some people recognize that the purpose of the title of any enyclopedia article is to specify the most common name used to refer to the subject of the article. Those that agree believe that the name of all those cities should not include any information other than the name of the city, including location information, like the name of the state, unless it is required to disambiguate.
Others disagree. Those that disagree have no common principle to follow when naming articles. It's really hit or miss based on who happens to be paying attention at the time of the survey, and what subjective reasons they may or may not find compelling to believe whether this or that convention should be followed to name each city article in question.
Of those that disagree, some believe that the name only (with the state location information) shouldn't be used for any U.S. cities. Others believe that there should be exceptions. Of those that believe there should be exceptions, some think there should be only one: New York City. Other think there could be a few more, like Chicago and San Francisco. Still others believe all well-known cities should be exceptions. So, we have to decide one city at time, and roll the dice. The outcome depends on who happens to be paying attention and what their whims happen to be. That's what makes the circumstances different for Boston, Chicago, San Francisco, and Seattle and every other U.S. city.
Luckily, for most other countries, there is a consensus about using the name of the city for the title unless there is a known ambiguity with other notable uses of that name, or this would be a problem that extended beyond the scope of U.S. cities. Let me know if this does not answer your question. --Serge 17:56, 26 August 2006 (UTC)
To answer physicq210 specific question as to how circumstances differ for Boston, Chicago, San Francisco, and Seattle. Firstly on the point of how well know places are. Boston, Chicago and San Francisco are cities with a long history of global trade and cultural influence, and are hence well known globally, in some case perhaps more so than their current contribution deserves. Seattle doesn't have that kind of history. It now has a strong economic influence (thanks to Boeing and Microsoft), but it takes a long time for that to bring global recognition. I would not say Seattle is that well known globally.
Secondly on ambiguity. San Francisco is the Spanish name for St Francis, one of the most famous saints; as a result there are many, many other places called San Francisco, some of them quite substantial places. Boston is named after a significant English regional center with a great deal of historical significance. So both have reasonable grounds for ambiguity. On the other hand neither Chicago nor Seattle are particularly ambiguous, at least as far as other places are concerned. Hope this answers your question. -- Chris j wood 23:13, 26 August 2006 (UTC)
Perhaps I should been more clear. What circumstances are different to warrant different polls? Won't one poll suffice? --physicq210 23:30, 26 August 2006 (UTC)
Or perhaps Serge answered the question already. Either way I'll respect the outcome of this poll. --physicq210 23:31, 26 August 2006 (UTC)
Perhaps I should have been more clear too. I am not advocating changing the name of every, or even many, US city article(s). I happen personally to think that allowing US cities to have their own special article naming rules was a mistake, but that is a done deal and I think it would be a waste of bandwidth to try to reverse it. However we do need to deal with the circumstances where it is causing real problems (ie. well known cities with ambiguous names). Clearly most of the thousands of US cities are not well known, even in their own state let alone globally. I cannot see any way of changing just some city names without discussing which cities to change. I'm open to suggestions, but having a separate vote on a each proposed city name change seems the simplest way to do this. -- Chris j wood 12:15, 27 August 2006 (UTC)
The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the debate. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

Large City Strawpoll Construction

Latest comment: 18 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

I am trying to work on a large City Strawpoll to end the feuding about larger cities in the United States. Please visit the page, User:Ericsaindon2/Sandbox and leave comments on the talk page, but dont edit the actual page. After it has been modified to satisfy the community, I will go ahead and open it. But, please review it and comment, to avoid controversy over its structure. I hope to open it in a few days after discussion, so please be timely in making your comments. Thanks. --Ericsaindon2 05:44, 29 August 2006 (UTC)

Photos

Latest comment: 18 years ago7 comments3 people in discussion

So this is what I'm thinking.

I'm not happy with the Golden Gate Park path photo, and the Fort Mason piers thing doesn't look like anything. And the Haight-Ashbury photo is of poor quality. The 1960 SF scene is also too small to see anything clearly. And I'm not sure about using Coit Tower to symbolize the hills of SF. Plus, I am sure there are more attractive photos of the Golden Gate Bridge with the fog rolling in. I've seen some, and some are majestic.

So here's a proposal for a few things:
1) Delete the 1860 photo. Move the PoFA up a little and I have a photo of servicemembers disembarking at Fort Mason in 1945 that I can add to the history section.
2) Lombard Street in the Geography section. A nice photo exists in the commons. That would mean we delete Coit Tower.
3) Find a better photo for the parks section. maybe the Conservatory of Flowers? a more bucolic scene?
4) Find a better photo of Haight-Ashbury for neighborhoods. Or maybe a better photo of a different neighborhood. Probably one outside the NE quadrant, because the Chinatown photo is already there.
5) What oculd go into the Port section? The Ferry Building? Fisherman's Wharf?
6) Better photo of a fog-engulfed GGBridge?

As for SFMOMA, it is one of the most distinctive modern buildings in San Francisco today. I really think it deserves to be there. And it's the most visited museum in the city.

Thought?--DaveOinSF 03:17, 30 August 2006 (UTC)

1) Agree on poor quality of 1860 photo, but would be nice to have a 19th cent. picture if we can find one. If not a WWII photo would be good, as you suggest.
2) Lombard Street would be better than Coit Tower, but neither one really illustrates "geography." Here's a great photo Calfornia Coastal Records Project but it doesn't have the right kind of license. If someone would go out to the Marin Highlands with a good camera and a telephoto we could get a mighty fine geography photo.
3) There is a tolerable picture on the C-of-F page. Agree that a picture of path is not very exciting.
4) Agree that we need a better neighborhood picture. Washington Park (North Beach?) The Marina from the Bay? Better Haight picture? Any would do.
5) Ferry Bldg is a possibility. Perhaps best would be a picture of the Cruise Ship terminal with ship.
6) Need a fog-engulfed GG Bridge picture for sure. If we can find a better one, it would be great.
7) SFMOMA. It is a striking building, but the current photo has that glass boat sculpture in it and has a poor perspective of the SFMOMA building (tilting backward). We need a better one, if we are going to include it. You can usually get a good picture of it from the top floor of the Metreon at dusk. The museum has some great pictures available. Perhaps they'd give permission to use one on Wikipedia if they were asked? However, I think that the Palace of the Legion of Honor is one of the most beautiful buildings on perhaps the most beautiful grounds in the entire city. It would be nice to use a good picture of it, too. Then we could have an old museum and a new one in the section.
--Paul 03:45, 30 August 2006 (UTC)

 
possible photo
File:Golden Gate by CS2x.jpg
current photo

1) I'll add the WWII picture and please let me know what you think. Won't delete the 1860 one just yet though.
2)I'll switch it to Lombard Street. But think about how we might work in Coit Tower somewhere on the page too. That picture you linked to would be very nice, especially as a cornerstone photo, and then we can move Alamo Square back to neighborhoods and problem (4) is solved. The background might be a little too small though.
3) Will change the GGPark photo. Tell me what you think.
4) haight ashbury would be preferable to symbolize neighborhoods, if we can find a striking enough photo.
5) I have a ferry bldg photo that I'll switch in there.
6) Which one is better?
7) OK, I'll try to get a better SFMOMA picture, but still thing that POTLOH one needs to be adjusted. I'll troll around for other public domain version images of it too. --DaveOinSF 04:04, 30 August 2006 (UTC)

6) What about one of those?

 
Corner of Haight and Ashbury
 
Street corner in Haight Ashbury

First one shows the actual corner of Haight and Ashbury, second one has more action. --Dschwen 09:06, 30 August 2006 (UTC)

Thanks! I edited the second one to trim off some of the space on the left and it is definitely better than the one that was up there. If you have any others that might be of interest (or any other striking SF photos) by all means bring them to our attention--DaveOinSF 17:35, 30 August 2006 (UTC)
Newest WW2 photo of the USS San Francisco sailing under the bridge in 1942 is a big improvment. --Paul 00:49, 2 September 2006 (UTC)

The picture of Baker Beach (Image:GGBBaker.JPG) that was added is not really a picture of the beach, it is a picture of GG Bridge... the THIRD picture of the bridge in the article. I vote to remove it as not really providing any value.--Paul 00:58, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

yeah, I have the same issue. The problem is that this version is actually a lovely picture, and indeed the best one of the bridge on the page. (the WWII one is more of a history shot and the Fog one is not of that high quality). So we have 3 Golden Gate Bridges in various places. It is the single most famous landmark of the city. We also have 2 cable cars (History and Transportation), and 2 downtown skylines (Economy and the Alamo Square one). The one the guy originally put up there was not only redundant because of the bridge, but it was really poorly composed. let's see what the reviewers say in FA process.

To Do Items

Latest comment: 18 years ago26 comments3 people in discussion

Here's what I was thinking was still necessary to do. By all means, add to or comment on this list with your own input or with input from the peer reviewers that I have failed to include here:

General
  • Doublecheck licenses on all photos
  • Standardize refenence format, include all publication dates
Done. (Paul.h)
  • Proofread/copyedit/etc.
ONLY MINOR CHANGES FROM NOW ON PLEASE!
  • Find ways to work in Coit Tower and Alcatraz photos
Screw it.
  • Make stubs for all red links.
Done (for now)
  • Add wikilinks where they might not have been included yet
  • Add "citation needed" indicators where necessary, followed by adding in the reference.
History
  • A little more on the years before the earthquake. We go kind of too fast from Gold Rush to destruction.
On second thought, maybe it's enough.
Perhaps this 'can' be expanded, mentioning Fort Point, Alcatraz, and the Presidio in more detail.--Paul 20:51, 30 August 2006 (UTC)
Alcatraz added to pre-WWII section.--DaveOinSF 23:36, 30 August 2006 (UTC)
Fort Point mention added--DaveOinSF 01:07, 31 August 2006 (UTC)
Added Presidio mention. Also want to add some specificity on building of civic institutions in pre-earthquake years, e.g. hotels, opera, GGPark--DaveOinSF 06:16, 31 August 2006 (UTC)
I think I'm done.--DaveOinSF 19:39, 31 August 2006 (UTC)
  • A little more on the rebuilding?
I think there's enough now.
  • A little about growth of industry and manufacturing
Things like Levis and Ghirardelli etc.
Added some mentions.--DaveOinSF 06:16, 31 August 2006 (UTC)
  • A nicer way to close the section?
  • Maybe a better WWII photo
I think we have a winner. USS San Francisco it is--DaveOinSF 06:16, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
  • Maybe a photo representing post WWII era. Maybe hippies in the 60s or something like that.
Added Grateful Dead photo in Haight, and will switch Haight photo in Neighborhoods.--DaveOinSF 00:21, 31 August 2006 (UTC)
I think we've achieved a fair amount of balance, even with the Grateful Dead photo, and Victorian architecture places it in SF. The period after WWII is lacking a photo, and acknowledgment of couterculture there is appropriate. For balance, I switched the Haight photo in neighborhoods to Pacific Heights, one that is equally difficult to tie to SF without a caption. If you can find a better post WWII photo, please let me know.--DaveOinSF 01:07, 31 August 2006 (UTC)
Geography
  • More captivating fog-drenched GGBridge photo
User:Un sogno modesto inserted a somewhat better picture. I'm not gonna search anymore.--DaveOinSF 19:39, 31 August 2006 (UTC)
  • Do we need the climatebox? Can we make it look any different?
I thought it was a godd addition, allowing the removal of a good bit of text. The other FA City articles have one. Its appearance certainly could be changed, what do you think would improve it?--Paul 20:51, 30 August 2006 (UTC)
OK. I don't really know how to improve it though. I'm at my limit of graphic design abilities here. I suppose this would be very low priority.--DaveOinSF 20:54, 30 August 2006 (UTC)
Neighborhoods
  • Maybe something about the character of the various ethnic neighborhoods, rather than just the fact that they live there.
Redid neighborhoods section, but need to trima little--DaveOinSF 06:16, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
  • Maybe a more striking H-A photo still
Switched to Pacific Heights street scene, but still, a better photo is always welcome.--DaveOinSF 00:21, 31 August 2006 (UTC)
  • Better GGPark photo instead of COF
New CofF photo looks more park-like.
  • Jewish concentration in the Richmond?
Good article here: Jewish Community in San Francisco mentions primarily the Fillmore and Western Addition.
Demographics
  • CALLING ALL GRAPHIC DESIGNERS! Please make the graph more attractive! I've tried my best and that's what I came up with. The data can be found under "Demographics" [here].
Government
  • The whole city-county thing is way too long
Shortened somewhat--DaveOinSF 20:37, 30 August 2006 (UTC)
  • Maybe an Alcatraz photo would work here?
Economy
  • ?
Media
  • Section is too big to be without a photo? Can we find a SF Chronicle cover page after the Loma Prieta Earthquake? Probably would be under copyright, but can we claim "fair use"?
Added Herb Caen masthead and quote. I think this is fair use.--DaveOinSF 07:14, 31 August 2006 (UTC)
Education
  • A bit too long. Need to chop a little
Chopped--DaveOinSF 22:53, 30 August 2006 (UTC)
Culture and contemporary life
Reworked prose. Also need to add some arts boilerplate to justify WMOH photo.--DaveOinSF 06:16, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
  • Boilerplate on current business environment
Dont think this is needed anymore.--DaveOinSF 06:16, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
  • Boilerplate on crime. I still think SF's alternative approach to law enforcement is noteworthy, and more engaging than simply statistics.
Article is back to almost too long, don't think this needs discussion or inclusion.--Paul 01:13, 3 September 2006 (UTC)
Transportation
  • I like it.
See Also and External Links
  • remove linkspam
  • We should discuss what should be listed in the See Also section.

--DaveOinSF 18:03, 30 August 2006 (UTC)

  • The See Also sections for Detroit and Boston are mostly trivia. NYC does not have a See Also section. I think what we have is better than many such sections, and fine for now. Future enhancements might include a Further Reading section, but there might be controversy associated with making up a good NPOV list that everyone would agree with.--Paul 23:40, 3 September 2006 (UTC)
References

Discussion of To Do Items
The article has undergone an amazing transformation in the last 10 days or so. A potential remaining problem is that we started out at 80K and cut stuff out to get down to 57K at one point, but we are back up to 72K now. Of couse, some of that is the much improved in-line references. Since the article now really does provides an "encyclopedic" summary of San Francisco, I'm inclined to leave it alone. I don't see how we could ever cut it down to 50K & even cutting 12K down to 60, would be difficult.

Yes, I know the article size is creeping up again. It is currently 72K, but other Featured Article cities are of comparable size: Seattle, Washington is 83K; Detroit, Michigan is 69K; Boston, Massachusetts is smaller at 59K. I think this article is better than any of those (Boston's is rather poor, in my opinion, with only 17 21 references) and is anyway a more famous and prominent city (no offense...).--DaveOinSF 19:32, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
I think most items I'm concerned with are done. I would still like it if some graphic designer here on Wikipedia could take a stab at the population graph and the climatebox, but I can live with it if not. I'm going to take a look at other comparable "See Also" sections on other articles to see what we should include here and what we should not. Also before submitting for FA, we should archive this talk page. Otherwise, maybe a slightly better photo of the Castro, but I'm not going to get too worked up about it.--DaveOinSF 03:46, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

In my opinion, the neighborhood section still needs a bit of chopping. Try moving a bit of information over to the main neighborhoods article, as not every neighborhood needs to be mentioned on the main page. Change this, and I will support FA without any qualms. Good job to everyone who contributed during this marathon overhaul, with most thanks given to Paul.h and DaveOinSF! --physicq210 23:50, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

could you please put these comments on the peer review page? That way all of the improvement suggestions and responses will be in one place. Thanks for the kind words.--Paul 00:23, 4 September 2006 (UTC)

San Francisco Jail section was deleted.

Latest comment: 18 years ago4 comments3 people in discussion

Is there a good reason that the section on the San Francisco Jails was deleted? Our jails are a very big deal, a major part of our public sector and subject to important public policy. Of course, they are not 'pretty' and not relevent to most tourists, but heck this is an encyclopedia not a tourism guide. Something as major as our jails deserves a little coverage. BruceHallman 19:15, 30 August 2006 (UTC)

The SF budget is $5billion. We don't mention everthing the city government does. Muni and SFUSD are far more important and properly get small mentions, but the scale of the original jails material was ridiculous. There are lots of arms of the local government, the jails being one of them. And most states/counties have jails. Is there anything noteworthy about the jails of San Francisco? I would encourage you to create a daughter article at Jails of San Francisco.--DaveOinSF 19:37, 30 August 2006 (UTC)
After the San Francisco aritcle was rejected for Featured Article status, it was put up for peer review. Both of the editors who made substantial suggestions felt that the jail section was out of place and inappropriate in the article. The jail material was not deleted, it was moved to its own article: San Francisco, California: County Jails. We will add a "See also" link to that article. We are trying to craft an article that highlights what makes San Francisco special. It doesn't make any sense to have a 3K jails section and not have room for Alcatraz or the Golden Gate Bridge. --Paul 20:28, 30 August 2006 (UTC)
Thanks, I appreciate the reasoned, cooperative and sensible response. (I am not used to getting that on Wikipedia. I guess I have been hanging out in the wrong places previously.) BruceHallman 13:57, 31 August 2006 (UTC)


Skyline Photos

Latest comment: 18 years ago7 comments2 people in discussion

There has been a lot of controversy regarding what picture to use for the economy section. The image i uploaded (Image:downtown San.jpg) was removed several times but i feel it is worthy of inclusion as it gives a wide view of the area. The reason for removal was it was too dark however i disagree and the current nightime image being used of the financial district is even darker. Dean randall 11:48, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

The downtown skyline of San Francisco is present in three photos - the main photo in the upper right, along with the Oakland Bay bridge in Transportation, and in the Economy section.
The original photo in the Economy section was solely of the Transamerca Building. Because you insisted a complete skyline was necessary there, I agreed to replace the Transamerica Building with the skyline photo you supplied. That photo, however, is of poor quality. It is a daytime photo taken from a distance with nothing in the foreground and with many gray coulds and the downtown buildings are in the shadow. I sought out a better photo to use in the Economy section to fulfill your wish that the entire skyline be represented. The picture that I found was quite good, a nighttime skyline taken from a vantage point that encompasses the Bay Bridge, Coit Tower, as well as the Financial District skyscrapers, with a clearly identifiable Transamerica Pyramid. It was much more attrative than the poorly composed one you supplied. If you insist on a daytime photo, please find one of better quality than the one you supplied. It would be nice if it were also taken from the same vantage point and included Coit Tower, as that landmark had not yet been included on this page. Your insistance on replacing the Transamerica Building with a more encompassing Financial District photo is a valid one.--DaveOinSF 16:18, 3 September 2006 (UTC)


yes, point taken. The photo i supplied was taken from the top of coit tower and i felt it gave a good view of the financial district but i agree it was taken on a cloudy day and the photo quality is not as good as it could be. However, in my opinion the photo which has replaced it is even worse. A good quality photo of the daytime skyline is required so in the mean time i suggest we either use my photo or use the original one. Dean randall 16:29, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

If you would be so kind as to proofread the article as a whole and make commentary on things beyond the inclusion of your photo, please do so. This article will soon be submitted for FA status, and the more eyes have seen it is better.
Please refrain from making any changes immediately, please. I will find a new photo within the next hour and will upload it.--DaveOinSF 16:37, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

thank you, that would be most appreciated Dean randall 16:41, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

There is a new photo on the page now. Once again, I would ask you to help us proofread the article as a whole and point out any glaring errors.--DaveOinSF 16:50, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

Thank you for the vast improvements made to the economy article. Your hard efforts and good contributions are very much appreciated Dean randall 18:30, 3 September 2006 (UTC)

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