Talk:Sharon McLaren

(Redirected from Talk:Sharon McLaren (River City))
Latest comment: 16 years ago by DGG

Unfortunately, it will be very hard to defend as a separate article at AfD. She's one of a number of current main characters, with no indication that she will have a continuing role past the current season. There is no sourcing at all. And I find the description of the multiple plot lines confusing. I find the writing immature, with too many exclamation marks; too many successive short sentences. And details are unclear: "caught Sharon stealing money from the till and on her online dating profile. " one can't steal money from an online profile, so I guess they caught her lying on her profile, or doing it on work time? What I could defend is a combination article on the current season characters--possibly successive ones for the successive seasons, where each of the many main characters has a paragraph or so-- more than the one sentence listing in the main list of characters, but better and shorter than this. DGG (talk) 19:32, 9 November 2008 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for the guidance. Well, Sharon will be returning as it is on the River City Spoilers page.Andrewmc123 (talk)