Talk:Snooze (SZA song)/Archive 1

Archive 1

GA Review

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Nominator: PSA (talk · contribs) 00:30, 2 November 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 14:44, 2 November 2024 (UTC)

Will review this in a few days :)) Arconning (talk) 14:44, 2 November 2024 (UTC)

Prose and MoS

Lead and infobox

• The main vocals are complemented by several layers of harmonies beneath, and a riff appears on the song's beginning., I'd suggest changing "on" to "in" or "at".
• Love the lead btw! Amazing writing. :)

Background

• No issues here on prose and MoS.

Composition

• No issues here, song is dreamy indeed.

Production

• Upon finishing the demo, BLK sent his work to Leon Thomas III, who, along with Khris Riddick-Tynes, compose the production duo the Rascals., I think it's a me problem but is "compose" in this sentence referring to the band or the song? If either answer would be given, would it be better to put composed?

Lyrics

• No issues.

Release

• No issues.

Critical reception

• No issues!

Commercial performance

• as a non-single track,, omit the comma.

Music video

• Well, that was a read.
• to nothing but a G-string underwear, omit "a" and wikilink "G-string underwear" if there's an applicable page.

Live performances and covers

• "John Legend" should probably be wikilinked.

Accolades, credits, charts, certifications, and release history

• Tables are formatted well with proper sourcing.

Refs

• Earwig just picks up lyrics, other possible violations are the same, so it's fine.
• Random spotchecks: 1, 11, 25, 26, 35, 36, 46, 53, 75, 84, 118. All good
• Fix citation 102 for the article about John Legend, seems not formatted properly.

Media

• Images and audio file have proper licensing and are relevant to the article.

Misc

• No ongoing edit war, broad and focused information, neutral as I see no bias whatsoever.

PSA, amazing writing btw! Here are my short comments. Arconning (talk) 14:23, 7 November 2024 (UTC)

Thank you for your review and kind words, @Arconning. All your suggestions have been implemented. Elias / PSA 🏕️🪐 ^{[please make some noise]} Elias / PSA 🏕️🪐 ^{[please make some noise]} 23:10, 7 November 2024 (UTC)

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