Talk:South Park season 13/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 06:11, 28 February 2010 (UTC)

Hiya, I'll be reviewing this article. I've watched the majority of this season and have been following the episode article's, so I'll have experience with the subject in my review. I also assume this is the ending to a GT? Good luck with it. Now let's start! The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 00:29, 1 March 2010 (UTC)

Lead

• I think the infobox should be colored to match the image.
  • Done. — Hunter Kahn 03:23, 1 March 2010 (UTC)
    • No, no, no, I mean gold, like the infobox image. The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 03:46, 1 March 2010 (UTC)
      • Oh, OK. Is this better? — Hunter Kahn 03:54, 1 March 2010 (UTC)
        • I've changed it to a different color, but I think doing the same to the episode list would be best. The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 02:42, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
• "[...]three new seasons the duo agreed[...]" -> "seasons Parker and Stone agreed"
  • Fixed. — Hunter Kahn 03:23, 1 March 2010 (UTC)
• Explain why Kanye West was hurt by "Fishsticks," as it isn't said.
  • I've tried rewording this a bit. Let me know if it works. — Hunter Kahn 03:23, 1 March 2010 (UTC)
    • Looks good. The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 02:42, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

Episodes

• "B.J." and "slutty" seem kinda slang-ish.
  • Changed. — Hunter Kahn 04:23, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
• "Meanwhile, Stan attemps to return an expensive drink mixer make him[...]" -> "[...]Stan attempts[...]mixer, which makes him[...]"
  • Made the changes. — Hunter Kahn 04:23, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
• "[...]the issue was about a larger point about women's rights[...]" -> wording here?
  • I've tried rewording it. — Hunter Kahn 04:23, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
• Does hell really need to be wikilinked?
  • Dropped. — Hunter Kahn 04:23, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
• No ratings info for "Whale Whores," right?
  • Unfortunately not. — Hunter Kahn 04:23, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

Production

• Is "supervisor producer" the right wording?
  • Nope, it should have been "supervising producer". I fixed it. — Hunter Kahn 14:20, 13 March 2010 (UTC)

Final say

I've decided to pass this article after the following are dealt with:

• The episode table should be colored to match the infobox.
  • Done, I think. — Hunter Kahn 02:25, 18 March 2010 (UTC)
• The "Awards" section should be changed to "Award."
  • Done. — Hunter Kahn 02:25, 18 March 2010 (UTC)
• What exactly does "mini-audio commentary" mean? Is it an audio commentary that plays over the episode, or...?
  • They are audio commentaries that play over the episode, but they only last four or five minutes, not the whole episode. From what I understand, Parker and Stone don't like doing them, so they do what they call "mini-commentaries". I tried to make the wording more clear. — Hunter Kahn 02:25, 18 March 2010 (UTC)

The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 00:31, 18 March 2010 (UTC)

Alright, that's a pass! Nice work, Hunter. And I apologize for taking so long. Keep up the good work and I'll be sure to vote "yes" on this GTC. :) The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 23:39, 18 March 2010 (UTC)