Talk:Space Bound/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: DivaKnockouts (talk · contribs) 20:53, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

• 5 dead links

Review

Lead

• Per WP:LEAD, remove references from the lead as you cite them in the article body.
• You should expand the lead to conform to WP:LEAD as well.
• Link Pornographic actress.

Development

• "He had me strip down the verses [...] and make the track a little more hip hop, and he sent it out. I didn't really believe that it would end up on Eminem's album, let alone be a single." -- Who said this?
• Since FN6 is dead much of this section needs to be removed or a new reference found.

Composition and reception

• "Space Bound" is an alternative hip hop song with influences of progressive rock and rock music. -- Reference?
• Slant Magazine gave a negative review on Recovery as a whole and disliked "Space Bound". "Eminem can't talk to women and he never could, so when he threatens to strangle anyone who leaves him, the peril feels forced and wholly off-putting." -- Who from Slant Magazine?
• Delink Recovery. Already linked in above section.

Music video

• A music video for "Space Bound" was filmed over three days in February 2011, in Los Angeles, California,[12] and was produced over approximately five months. → The music video for "Space Bound" was filmed over three days in February 2011, in Los Angeles, California,[12] and was produced over approximately five months.
• The video was directed by Joseph Kahn,[12]... → It was directed by Joseph Kahn,[12]...
• Photos of the video shooting were released and two low quality snippets of the then-unfinished video leaked. -- Reference? Statements like this need a reliable source.
• Add (2000) after The Marshall Mathers LP.

Credits and personnel

• Everything looks fine here.

Charts and certifications

• Though it isn't required, I recommend you archive these remaining chart positions as there is no telling when they can go bad. I've learned that the hard way.
• Since the Billboard link required registration don't worry about it being dead. Its treated the same.

Release history

• You claim in the Infobox that the song was released as digital download. This table only shows radio release history.

References

• FN2: What makes this reliable?
• FN3: Needs a full citation
• FN4: ^So does this one
• FN6: Dead
• FN7: Unreliable?
• FN10: Needs publisher
• FN11: Needs publisher also
• FN12: Link MTV
• FN13: Needs to be formatted better.
• FN17: Needs publisher (Apple)
• FN22: Delink MTV News
• FN36: Use (subscription required) better.

• Putting article  On hold until issues have been addressed. — DivaKnockouts 21:47, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

  Hello, DivaKnockouts. Improvements are unlikely to be made, so you can close this review. The nominator does not seem active either, considering he's only edited once since the review began. If only I had time; I could have made the improvements. But oh well, cheers! —WP:PENGUIN · ^{[ TALK ]} 16:21, 1 April 2013 (UTC)

✗ Fail Failing article since issues have not been addressed. Regards. — DivaKnockouts 16:44, 1 April 2013 (UTC)