Talk:Stefan Vladislav/GA1
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Latest comment: 9 years ago by Zoupan in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: 3family6 (talk · contribs) 19:54, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
- No copyvios detected.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- Much of the prose needs to be improved, both for phrasing and for punctuation use.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- "and Khan Bata (the grandson of Genghis Khan)" - link to Batu Khan, and perhaps call him Batu in this article, since that's what the Wikipedia article on him calls him.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
- Fixed Khan Bata→Batu Khan.--Zoupan 18:28, 3 February 2015 (UTC)
- The following sentences are stand-alone, and thus should be merged into a paragraph: "Jireček thought that Vladislav lived in Skadar.[10]" and "Vladislav died in ca. 1269 and was buried in Mileševa." The first sentence is also fragmentary, and should be expanded.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
- In Accession, one sentence says "some of his nobility revolted in fall 1233." - Because many readers may be in the southern hemisphere, where seasons are the opposite of those in the north, a term such as "late 1233" might be a better word choice. If a month range is given in sources, perhaps use that.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- The "Personality" section has only one sentence, so the section should be deleted and the content moved into another section.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Has a well-formatted reference section.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- B. Citations to reliable sources, where necessary:
- "There is a hypothesis that Radoslav even received a part of Serbian land to administrate." - this needs a citation
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Whole paragraph cited by Fajfric.--Zoupan 18:34, 3 February 2015 (UTC)
- That's fine. I just wanted to confirm that it was supported by a source.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 19:11, 3 February 2015 (UTC)
- Whole paragraph cited by Fajfric.--Zoupan 18:34, 3 February 2015 (UTC)
- "Note that, as Vladislav ruled from 1233 to 1243 and died after 1264, the flag predates the time of the description." - this should have a citation as well.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- Removed unnecessary (obvious) observation.--Zoupan 18:31, 3 February 2015 (UTC)
- C. No original research:
- All content is verifiable.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- C. No original research:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- Major aspects are addressed, stays broad in scope.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- B. Focused:
- Stays focused on the subject, no extraneous detail.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair, neutral presentation.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No disruptive editing since this article was created.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Images are properly licensed, though I had to fill out some missing parameters for several.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- Relevant, with suitable captions.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall: Needs some work on the prose.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail:
- All issues resolved, passed.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 19:11, 3 February 2015 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail:
- Thank you! I will continue to have the article improved!--Zoupan 20:38, 3 February 2015 (UTC)