Talk:Taksony of Hungary/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 18:20, 23 December 2013 (UTC) Hi,I will be reviewing this article.

Dear Royroydeb, thank you for the time you dedicated to this article. Borsoka (talk) 07:21, 24 December 2013 (UTC)

• "was Grand Prince of the Hungarians"-an article is missing.It should be -"was a Grand Prince of the Hungarians" RRD13 (talk) 18:20, 23 December 2013 (UTC)

Thanks. Modified. Borsoka (talk) 07:21, 24 December 2013 (UTC)

• "in the year of Our Lord's incarnation 931"-These quoted words are of whom? RRD13 (talk) 18:20, 23 December 2013 (UTC)

Thanks. Modified. Borsoka (talk) 07:21, 24 December 2013 (UTC)

• The Early Life section is too short.I mean it only says about its parents.Not to include anything else? RRD13 (talk) 18:20, 23 December 2013 (UTC)

Thanks. I think the Early Life section provides all information on his life we have: his parents, the date of his life, his father's possible abdication and his plundering raid in Italy. Borsoka (talk) 07:21, 24 December 2013 (UTC)

• land of Bular-What is modern Bular?I mean in history books if an old name of a place is given, the current name is given beside in brackets.

Thanks. Wikilink added to Volga Bulgaria. Borsoka (talk) 07:21, 24 December 2013 (UTC)

RRD13 (talk) 18:20, 23 December 2013 (UTC)