Talk:The Office (American TV series) season 8/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 23:51, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

Issues:

• Lede: Link American to Television in the United States
• Lede: Link television comedy
• Lede: premiered → commencing airing
• Lede: September 22, 2011 on NBC → on NBC in the United States on September 22, 2011
• Lede: "and concluded on May 10, 2012", the first episode was almost a year long? Please rephrase.

  Well, it does say "the eighth season", not "the first episode", so if shouldn't be that confusing.

  I got that concern from another user who review one of my articles. TBrandley 00:52, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

  Fixed it NoD'ohnuts (talk) 16:35, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: British TV series of the same name → British comedy series of the same name
• Lede: as part of Comedy Night Done Right. → as part of the Comedy Night Done Right television block
• Lede: "2011-2012 season". Make a dash per WP:DASH; use this – for the correction.
• Lede: Link 2011-2012 season
• Lede: Link previous season to The Office (U.S. season 7)
• Production: The show is based on the British series created by Ricky Gervais and Stephen Merchant → The show is based on the British comedy series of the same name, which was created by Ricky Gervais and Stephen Merchant for the BBC
• Production: Where did it filming in? Thanks

  Couldn't find a reliable source that said where it filmed. NoD'ohnuts (talk) 16:38, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

• Production: spinoff → spin-off
• Cast: "Two writers for the long-running animated comedy series". Isn't neutral change to "Two writers for the animated comedy series"
• Cast: "due to her pilot, The Mindy Project, for Fox being picked up for 13 episodes". → "due to her pilot, The Mindy Project, created for the Fox network being picked up". It hasn't been picked up for any number, thus meaning it is violation of WP:CRYSTALBALL
• Cast: "NBC also announced that Catherine Tate would become a series regular". Isn't this about season 8, not 9
• Reception: The series aired on Thursdays at 9:00 p.m. as part of Comedy Night Done Right. → The series was originally broadcast on Thursdays at 9:00 p.m., as part of the Comedy Night Done Right television block.
• Reception: "Critical reviews" → "Critical response"
• Reception: "Myles McNutt from The A.V. Club". Please make The A.V. Club italicized. The A.V. Club → The A.V. Club
• References: All references that use TV by the Numbers should not be italic.
• References: All references that use The A.V. Club should be italic.

Nice work. On hold. TBrandley 23:51, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

I went through and fixed a good chunk of the issues. I'm also going to double-check everything and beef up the plot summaries, per a comment on the talk page.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:23, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the help! NoD'ohnuts (talk) 16:38, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. Will promote. TBrandley 04:33, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks NoD'ohnuts (talk) 08:11, 28 June 2012 (UTC)