Talk:The Slim Shady LP/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by DAP388 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: DAP388 (talk · contribs) 02:58, 12 July 2012 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay. Let's start the review, shall we?
- Lead
- "It was released on February 23, 1999 under Dr. Dre's Aftermath Entertainment, and Web Records." The comma is unnecessary.
- "Recorded in Ferndale, Michigan following Eminem's discovery by Dr. Dre and Jimmy Iovine" Discovery isn't the right word. Recruitment is better in this context.
- Background
- No issues.
- Recording
- No issues.
- Lyrics
- No issues.
- Production
- No issues.
- Commercial response
- Why is "platinum" capitalized in mid-sentence? It is a generic term.
- Critical reception
- The A.V. Club is a publication, and thus should be italicized.
- Wikilink Spin.
- Aftermath
- No issues.
- Lawsuits
- No issues.
That's all. On hold until the issues are resolved. —DAP388 (talk) 19:05, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
I believe I have fixed everything. Thanks a bunch for the review! :) Basilisk4u (talk) 20:45, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
- Looks good. That's a pass. :) —DAP388 (talk) 01:42, 16 July 2012 (UTC)