Talk:Travis Zajac

Latest comment: 12 years ago by HorvCannuck in topic Ukrainian Canadian?

Ukrainian Canadian?

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I have this source, page 17, that describes him as a "Ukrainian center". Is this a legit enough source to use in the article?--Львівське (talk) 18:20, 27 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

Do you have original site of The Ukrainian Weekly? I've seen on one site that said for Travis Zajac "He's a Canadian with Croatian ancestry (his paternal grandparents still live in Croatia)". That source was not reliable, although that does not mean that the information is wrong. HorvCannuck (talk) 10:31, 28 September 2012 (UTC)Reply

NPOV, “Peacock” Words, Puffery... needs a bit of objectivity

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This article reads like promotional ad copy. "Zajac's work ethic, diligence, and confidence have been being fine tuned throughout his entire life, yet he sets personal expectations very high for himself," "Zajac has ice hockey running through his blood". Even the language "his teammates agree that the 25 year old Zajac will be an even more dominant player for years to come," while cited, would presumably be cited to mere puffery. (It's hard to tell, as the cite seems to be to a broken link.) Could the writer of the language find more objective language? Xenophonix (talk) 14:46, 15 March 2011 (UTC)Reply