Talk:Tri-City Pavilions

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Vincent60030 (talk) 17:24, 19 September 2020 (UTC)

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• ... that the J. C. Penney store at Arizona's Tri-City Mall was profitable, but it was closed after the mall owner insisted on a long-term lease deal? Source: [1]

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Injector pen
• Comment: Currently at AfD (nominated August 28); the 5x expansion is a response to that AfD.

5x expanded by TenPoundHammer (talk) and Raymie (talk). Nominated by Raymie (talk) at 21:39, 30 August 2020 (UTC).

• The hook is rather uninteresting. You have so much more in the article; the oil masquerading as rain and other features are interesting; you could also play with the names of the stores. Yoninah (talk) 13:44, 1 September 2020 (UTC)

• @Yoninah: A few other malls had "wonderfalls" like that around the same time period, so it isn't unique, and I don't see any funny DYKs emerging from the latter. Raymie (t • c) 20:53, 1 September 2020 (UTC)

• ALT1: ... that the $10 million Tri-City Mall in Mesa, Arizona, began to lose stores and customers ten years after opening, and even a multimillion-dollar renovation could not save it? Yoninah (talk) 21:29, 1 September 2020 (UTC)

• That'd be fine, even if it reads to me like a lot of dead mall stories... Raymie (t • c) 22:14, 1 September 2020 (UTC)

• AFD closed as keep. Ready for full review. Yoninah (talk) 14:34, 4 September 2020 (UTC)

• This article is a five-fold expansion and is new enough and long enough. The hook facts of ALT0 and ALT1 are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tri-City Pavilions/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:51, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add WP:ALT text to the main image in the infobox.
• Remove the hyphen between "grand-opening".
• "lightpoles" should be written as two words.
• Remove the comma after "first in Arizona".
• Sources are archived.
• Use "|last= |first=" for every author.
• Sources from Newspaper.com should link to a clipping, not the main newspaper. They should also be marked with "|via=Newspaper.com".
• Sort categories in alphabetical order.
• Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:46, 17 July 2021 (UTC)

• I'll let TPH handle most of this, but I fixed the remaining citation issues and clipped them to match the other clippings I'd supplied for this page. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 08:18, 23 July 2021 (UTC)

@TenPoundHammer: it has been a week Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:41, 28 July 2021 (UTC)

• @Sammi Brie: @Some Dude From North Carolina: I'll work on it tonight and tomorrow. Ten Pound Hammer • ^{(What did I screw up now?)} 02:31, 29 July 2021 (UTC)

  Some Dude From North Carolina, just made the non-citation changes as well on TPH's behalf. This should resolve all of the remaining issues from the review. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:17, 30 July 2021 (UTC)