Talk:Triumph of a Heart

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Carbrera in topic GA Review

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Why is the car called a "boyfriend" here? He could be a husband. --Amir E. Aharoni 06:13, 6 November 2006 (UTC)Reply

In the making-of video, they say that the video's premise was an old Icelandic legend about a woman who marries a cat. Similarly, the DVD also shows them staging the accident with a stunt double specifically for the video. Without corroboration from the original author, I'm inclined to change the article to reflect this.
Wellspring 23:18, 11 March 2007 (UTC)Reply
We must have different DVD's, because in the version I saw in the legend the woman was the cat, and it was definitely Björk that fell. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.64.128.148 (talk) 02:19, 30 January 2010 (UTC)Reply

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 23:30, 10 January 2018 (UTC)Reply


Initial comments:

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  • You quote ""the workings of anatomy" in the lead, so it must be cited
  • Same must occur for "erratic"
  • "Pitchfork" needs to be italicized
  • In the block quote, I believe citation #9 should be placed at the end of the block versus where it currently is
  • Not sure if "website" after "BBC Manchester" is entirely necessary
  • Several critics suggest that "Triumph of a Heart" was a successful album closer; could this be mentioned in the lead too?
  • Maybe including the release year for The Medúlla Videos DVD set in parentheses would be helpful to the reader
  • Using "div col" in the "Track listings and formats" section awkwardly splits up the different releases, depending on the size of the page; I'd recommend changing it to "col-begin"/"col-2"/"col-end" in brackets so you can control where the splits occur – if you need an example of this, let me know
  • You could include a link to the official music video for "Triumph of a Heart" under the "External links" section
  • Perhaps you might want to archive any reference links right now so they are preserved in the future by using this link
This is one of my favorite Björk songs; glad to see the article being taken care of! I'll place this article on hold to allow for any improvements to be made. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 19:11, 17 February 2018 (UTC).Reply
@Carbrera: Thanks for the review, I think I have addressed all the issues mentioned, and I will archive the links in the future. Alex talk 09:00, 18 February 2018 (UTC)Reply
11JORN – Thank you for your patience. I will be passing this article now. Carbrera (talk) 19:23, 20 February 2018 (UTC).Reply
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