Talk:Typhoons Louise and Marge/GA1

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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 01:04, 9 December 2020 (UTC)

Doing. Noah^Talk 01:04, 9 December 2020 (UTC)

• reconnaissance aircraft began probing the developing storm USAF I assume... I would also mention the unit involved.

@Hurricane Noah: There is no mention of USAF or any US military unit involved from the source, I consider any addition to be WP:OR.  Not done. SMB99thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

• torm.[20][21][22].[23] Extra punctuation

 Done SMB99thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

• valued in the millions of Philippine pesos I believe it should be "in" instead of "of"

 Done SMB99thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

Really isn't that much here to correct. Noah^Talk 12:52, 9 December 2020 (UTC)

It's finished. SMB99thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)