Talk:Typhoon Ofelia
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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 04:37, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
Hi YE, I am going to review this article tonight.--12george1 (talk) 04:37, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
- "was the first of two typhoons in 1990 to directly affect the Philippines within a week." - Wikilink to the 1990 Pacific typhoon season?
- "and on 00:00 UTC on June 24," ---> "and at 00:00 UTC on June 24,". The same thing occurs near the end of the MH section. While you're at it, wikilink Coordinated Universal Time in the lead section
- "Hualien City was the hardest it by the typhoon," ---> "Hualien City was the hardest hit by the typhoon,"
- I'm counting 56 deaths in the Philippines and 40 in China. So shouldn't the infobox say 96 deaths?
- Good catch. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
- "originated from the monsoon trough situated near the Caroline Islands." - Wikilink monsoon trough
- "According to the JTWC, however, this did not take place until 00:00 UTC on June 25 when it moved offshore" - Replace "it" with "the system/storm/cyclone/etc." to avoid suggesting that the JTWC moved offshore :P
- Fair enough. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
- "and was merging with a frontal zone" ---> "when it moved offshore and merged with a frontal zone"
- "twenty-tree were rendered missing due to flooding and mudslides." - Twenty-tree? :P
- Insert Template:1990 Pacific typhoon season buttons at the bottom of the page
Not too bad. Hopefully you can get this done quickly.--12george1 (talk) 04:37, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for the speedy review. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
- Great! I will pass this article now.--12george1 (talk) 15:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)