Talk:USS Breese
 | USS Breese has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: May 24, 2013. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 19:08, 23 May 2013 (UTC)
Ok, I'll be your reviewer for this one! Seems only fair as you've reviewed so many of my ST episode articles. :) Miyagawa (talk) 19:08, 23 May 2013 (UTC)
Lead: Worth saying that it was the only ship named for the Captain, as you have in the body of the article.
- Fixed. —Ed!(talk) 21:04, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
Interwar period: Probably just me being dense, but is there another way to word "cruised for several days as a convoy escort toward the end of World War I" so that it doesn't sound like the end of World War I was a destination?
- Fixed. —Ed!(talk) 21:04, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
World War II: Worth saying that the Yorktown was an aircraft carrier and that the San Francisco was a heavy cruiser.
- Fixed. —Ed!(talk) 21:04, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
Just one duplicate link. Image is suitably referenced, all references are sound. Miyagawa (talk) 20:08, 23 May 2013 (UTC)
- Fixed. That's everything. Thanks for your review! —Ed!(talk) 21:04, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
- Good work. All set for GA. Miyagawa (talk) 22:12, 24 May 2013 (UTC)