Talk:Wallsend FC

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Latest comment: 13 years ago by Moonriddengirl in topic Tone

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The tone of this article, including its first person plural pronoun and such promotional language as "The beautiful views out to the west make viewing matches at the ground a pleasure; idyllic vistas and classic Newcastle weather set the scene for Wallsend Football Club’s visitors." are highly inappropriate for Wikipedia. The purpose of this website is to provide an encyclopedic overview of notable subjects, presenting neutrally information that can be verified to have been published in reliable sources. Wikipedia is not the place for publishing first-hand observations or experiences. Please neutralize the article and revise it. Both the promotional language and the inappropriate pronouns suggest that the article may have been written by the club itself, which raises challenges under the conflict of interest guideline. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 13:57, 25 March 2011 (UTC)Reply