Talk:Washington State Route 276/GA1
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Reviewer: TCN7JM (talk · contribs) 05:56, 25 February 2013 (UTC)
Sometime soon. –TCN7JM 05:56, 25 February 2013 (UTC)
Hatting discussion. Next time wait until the first reviewer finishes to leave comments. –TCN7JM 03:21, 1 March 2013 (UTC)
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NoteseditThe sentence "the latter averaging up to 19,000 vehicles in 2011 according to a survey conducted by the Washington State Department of Transportation (WSDOT) measuring average annual daily traffic (AADT)" is confusing because I'm not sure if traffic is averaging 19,000 vehicles/year or 19,000 vehicles/day. It does include a link to the average annual daily traffic, but it would be helpful to have it explicitly stated. Sainid (talk) 22:06, 28 February 2013 (UTC)
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- located in the U.S. state of Washington flows better than located in Washington, United States.
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- In the second and third sentences, I'd change both uses of "in" to "at". I don't normally describe myself at being in an intersection, rather at one.
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- You know what? Maybe the other guy was right. Just using "19,000 vehicles" is a bit cryptic unless you somehow reword the sentence to mention AADT first.
This is going on hold for you to fix stuff. –TCN7JM 03:38, 1 March 2013 (UTC)
- Passing the article. Nice job! –TCN7JM 04:00, 1 March 2013 (UTC)