Talk:West Hendford Cricket Ground/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Relentlessly (talk · contribs) 07:11, 30 March 2015 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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This is nearly there, but there are a few things to clear up.

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   A few bits of prose read oddly, mainly in the first paragraph of "History".
   "Yeovil and County Cricket Club were formed" – here I believe you need the singular, as you're referring to a single entity, not a collection of individuals. The same later in the same sentence.
   "the club was reformed with the lesser remit" – you mean "re-formed", I think
   You use "the club" several times starting after "The club played at West Hendford" but you are referring to two different clubs. This is quite confusing.
   Pet peeve: "from 17–19 August" really ought to be "from 17 to 19 August".
   Final paragraph of "History": "The final first-class match was played on the ground" should be "The final first-class match on the ground was played".

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   Reference 26 is broken

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   You're understandably a little uncertain about the non-free use rationale, but I think it's valid.

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   On hold for 7 days to address the above issues. Relentlessly (talk) 07:11, 30 March 2015 (UTC)

   Thanks for the review Relentlessly. I've had a run through the article, and I think your comments have all been addressed. Harrias ^talk 11:20, 30 March 2015 (UTC)

   Modifications look good. Pass. Relentlessly (talk) 13:16, 30 March 2015 (UTC)