Talk:William de Ros, 6th Baron Ros

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Latest comment: 6 days ago by 2.48.214.254 in topic GA Review
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GA Review

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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 15:22, 5 June 2018 (UTC)Reply

I'll start this review in a few days. auntieruth (talk) 15:22, 5 June 2018 (UTC)Reply

Hi, Read it through, suggest a couple of edits here ...included some incomplete sentences, and a few other hiccups. Also, lands were centered in, not focused on.... I think..... If this is good, I'll be ready to pass. I think you can remove the complicating bit of the opening paragraph on inheriting because his brother died. Minor detail that you cover sufficiently in article. auntieruth (talk) 14:36, 11 June 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • Thanks for that Auntieruth55. I agree with the edits you made there—the non-breaking spaces are always tricky for me—and I've removed the bit about his bro from the lead (William inherited his father's barony, with extensive lands centred on Lincolnshire, in 1394 now), and got rid of focused, well spotted; It's probably my blind spot, but I can't see any more clipped sentences—do any jump out at you? Thanks again! —SerialNumber54129 paranoia /cheap sh*t room 15:44, 11 June 2018 (UTC)Reply
Very kind Auntieruth55, thanks very much! —SerialNumber54129 paranoia /cheap sh*t room 14:04, 12 June 2018 (UTC)Reply
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

@ 2.48.214.254 (talk) 23:29, 1 November 2024 (UTC)Reply