Template:Did you know nominations/Library of Alexandria
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:19, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
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Library of Alexandria
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Nineteenth-century imagining of the Library of Alexandria
- ... that Eratosthenes, the head librarian of the Library of Alexandria, calculated the circumference of the earth with near-perfect accuracy in the third century BC? Source: "Eratosthenes was the first scholar to apply mathematics to geography and map-making[51] and, in his treatise Concerning the Measurement of the Earth, he calculated the circumference of the earth and was only off by less than a few hundred kilometers.[51][46][52]"
- ALT1:... that the Library of Alexandria was one of the largest and most significant libraries of the ancient world? Source: "The Library [of Alexandria] was one of the largest and most significant libraries of the ancient world, but details about it are a mixture of history and legend.[17]"
Improved to Good Article status by Katolophyromai (talk). Self-nominated at 17:11, 22 November 2018 (UTC).
Substantial article on excellent sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. The image is licensed, but not impressive in small size, and only an imagination. I prefer the original hook, and we could perhaps use the image of him.? Minor: refs Canfora, Empereur and Gibbon are not used, - please use or move to further reading. Not sure about Roman Period vs. Roman period. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:21, 23 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: I prefer to original hook as well, but I offered up the second one just in case the reviewer preferred one more focused on the Library itself. The image is optional and I did not really expect it to be used, but I thought I would put here just in case the reviewer wanted an image. There are no authentic representations of Eratosthenes from his own lifetime, but there are a number of imaginative portrayals of him from later periods. I do not think any of them would show up very well at a small size,though. I have removed the ref for Empereur, since that source was a book clearly aimed at elementary and middle schoolers and I have moved the ref for Canfora to the "Further reading" section. I have kept Gibbon where he was, since he actually is cited in the article, but not as an sfn. I have corrected the one instance of "Roman period" to "Roman Period" for consistency. Also, note that I still need to fulfill QPQ. --Katolophyromai (talk) 17:18, 23 November 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for reminding me of the qpq, and for the explanations. - I fixed the refs, to avoid ugly error messages. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:31, 23 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: I have now reviewed the nomination for the article Scharwenzel. I believe that fulfills QPQ. Regarding the refs, I could find no error messages in the version of the article you corrected, but, for some reason, people always seem to be seeing error messages on their computers that I cannot see on mine. I think someone mentioned something once about needing to have a special software installed in order to see them. In any case, thank you very much for correcting them. --Katolophyromai (talk) 18:34, 30 November 2018 (UTC)
(little time, or would expain the tool, - later) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:18, 30 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: I have now reviewed the nomination for the article Scharwenzel. I believe that fulfills QPQ. Regarding the refs, I could find no error messages in the version of the article you corrected, but, for some reason, people always seem to be seeing error messages on their computers that I cannot see on mine. I think someone mentioned something once about needing to have a special software installed in order to see them. In any case, thank you very much for correcting them. --Katolophyromai (talk) 18:34, 30 November 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for reminding me of the qpq, and for the explanations. - I fixed the refs, to avoid ugly error messages. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:31, 23 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: I prefer to original hook as well, but I offered up the second one just in case the reviewer preferred one more focused on the Library itself. The image is optional and I did not really expect it to be used, but I thought I would put here just in case the reviewer wanted an image. There are no authentic representations of Eratosthenes from his own lifetime, but there are a number of imaginative portrayals of him from later periods. I do not think any of them would show up very well at a small size,though. I have removed the ref for Empereur, since that source was a book clearly aimed at elementary and middle schoolers and I have moved the ref for Canfora to the "Further reading" section. I have kept Gibbon where he was, since he actually is cited in the article, but not as an sfn. I have corrected the one instance of "Roman period" to "Roman Period" for consistency. Also, note that I still need to fulfill QPQ. --Katolophyromai (talk) 17:18, 23 November 2018 (UTC)
