Template:Did you know nominations/National Institute of Food Technology Entrepreneurship and Management

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:56, 3 February 2020 (UTC)

National Institute of Food Technology Entrepreneurship and Management

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Main block of NIFTEM

~~... that National Institute of Food Technology Entrepreneurship and Management (NIFTEM) (main block pictured) was announced in 2006 but only inaugurated in 2012?~~ Source: For announcement in 2006: "Budget '06: Full text". The Economic Times. 28 February 2006. Retrieved 13 January 2020. For inauguration in 2012: Siwach, Sukhbir (20 December 2012). "2012: A story of Haryana's achievements". The Times of India. Retrieved 13 January 2020.

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Acanthurus dussumieri
Comment: Original AfC by anonymous editor 58.182.172.95, which I rewrote almost completely while accepting the article.

Moved to mainspace by Muhandes (talk) and 58.182.172.95 (talk). Nominated by Muhandes (talk) at 13:38, 13 January 2020 (UTC).

Article is new (moved to mainspace on Jan 13 2020). Hook is OK & appropriate length, but maybe consider adding "located in India" after the name? Copyvio check suggests violation unlikely. Sources support hook. Sources in article also look OK. — Preceding unsigned comment added by QuakerSquirrel (talk • contribs) 17:22, 19 January 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I came by to promote this, but the hook is terribly mundane. Yoninah (talk) 20:25, 30 January 2020 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that the first convocation of the National Institute of Food Technology Entrepreneurship and Management (NIFTEM) (main block pictured), held in February 2018, was attended by the President of India Ram Nath Kovind? Source: "President attends 1st convocation of NIFTEM in Haryana". www.aninews.in. 10 February 2018. Retrieved 31 January 2020.

@Yoninah: How about ALT1 above? --Muhandes (talk) 09:29, 31 January 2020 (UTC)

@Muhandes: Honestly? If that's the best you can come up with, it will have to do, though I daresay it won't get many clicks. If only you could add some interesting stories to the article, like student exhibits or awards, you could come up with a more colorful hook. Yoninah (talk) 17:57, 1 February 2020 (UTC)

@Yoninah: ~~If it will do, then I think we should go with it.~~ Actually, I have an idea. I will ping when done. --Muhandes (talk) 18:24, 1 February 2020 (UTC)
ALT2 ... that the National Institute of Food Technology Entrepreneurship and Management conducts research on improving the taste and nutritional value of a children's dietary supplement which the Kerala government distributes in large volumes?
ALT3 ... that National Institute of Food Technology Entrepreneurship and Management (NIFTEM) (main block pictured), conducts research on improving the taste and nutritional value of a children's dietary supplement which the Kerala government distributes?

@Yoninah: How about ALT2? I am having problems getting sources on the actual volume of distribution (1300 tonne per year? per month?) so I rather not use a number, but it is a large volume. If this does not work and ALT3 is not hooky enough, then I'm afraid we will have to use ALT1, I can't find much secondary sources about the institute. --Muhandes (talk) 15:59, 2 February 2020 (UTC)

Thank you, ALT2 is excellent. Since the image is not of great quality at thumbnail size, I've removed the "(pictured)", and I also shorted ALT2 by removing the acronym. ALT2 hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per QuakerSquirrel. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 16:07, 2 February 2020 (UTC)