User:Cmm014/Human impact on marine life/Chase.ingersoll23 Peer Review

General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Cmm014

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cmm014/Human_impact_on_marine_life?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Human impact on marine life

Evaluate the drafted changes

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I believe you have done a nice job so far! I really think the sources you have added are up to date and do a great job complementing the article as a whole. When you add a lead make sure it adds good relevance to the topic and is not bland. I also want you to make sure none of your sources have any sort of bias in them. You have to be careful about the bias aspect on Wikipedia. I do believe every source you have seems fairly neutral so far. I think adding a few images will enhance your work and draw readers in. Images add great character to a specific article. Overall the article seems well organized thus far. I think you have a great start good luck!