User:Dingers99/Social media and suicide/Ellsbells1 Peer Review

Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content

Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic?
Is the content added up-to-date?
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral?
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
Are the sources current?
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization

Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Examples of good feedback

A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.

Peer review of "Homemaking"
Peer review of this article about a famous painting

Additional Resources

Check out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions.

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

Dingers99

Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dingers99/Social_media_and_suicide?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists): Social media and suicide

Evaluate the drafted changes

I really enjoyed reading your lead section. I think it's very strong, and provides an extremely well summarised account of the topic. The lead sentence details exactly what the article is about, and it does a decent job describing the major sections of the article. I don't think it's overly detailed, but I wouldn't recommend adding more to it. However, I would definitely add more references to the lead specifically. There is only 1 source cited at the moment, so it would be beneficial to add at least a few more.

The content you added is definitely relevant to the topic, and the reference I can see is up to date. I would recommend going in and editing your sources to make sure the "check date values" error goes away. I had to do this too for many of my sources. From what you've already edited, I don't think much is missing. Obviously you're still working on your article, so there is more content to add along the way. It would be interesting to add more info to this section from marginalized groups. If you can, try and find more sources about this to add.

I appreciate the tone of this article a lot. It is very fact based, and it doesn't seem biased in any direction. My biggest recommendation here is to add many more citations to the article overall. There are a few places in the body that have a citation needed notification. 3 of your references are showing up a little funny to me:

login.collegeofidaho.idm.oclc.org. doi:10.1080/26408066.2020.1788478 https://login.collegeofidaho.idm.oclc.org/login?qurl=https://www.tandfonline.com%2fdoi%2ffull%2f10.1080%2f26408066.2020.1788478. Retrieved 2022-10-09.

Since I am logged into the C of I, I'm not sure why this is happening. However, it wasn't happening with the other article I reviewed. Maybe a good thing to look into, but it totally could be something on my end as well. Since I can't see them, I'm not sure if they're current or the authors are diverse. The sources that I can see do work, and seem reputable and accurate.

Overall, I believe the article so far is well organized and well written. It's easy to read, and full of good information. Moving forward I would recommend adding more citations to both the existing article and what you add. Good job! I really like it!