User:Jemanly/Early childhood education/Sam.canaz Peer Review
Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
General info
edit- Whose work are you reviewing?
jemanly
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jemanly/Early_childhood_education?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- Early childhood education
Evaluate the drafted changes
editBoth additions to this article have very strong leads and well written topic sentences that accurately introduce the topic at hand. Content is relevant to the topics and adds important information to the article. Content is not biased and is very factual. The only thing I would reevaluate is the grammar in some sections. For example, I think a comma should be added in the quote "play is the highest expression of human development in childhood for it alone is the free expression of what is in the child’s soul." between childhood and for. In the next sentence a think "a" should be added before teacher to make the sentence flow better. In the last sentence, reword the part 'such as completely tasks independent' to maybe completing tasks independently. Overall, very well written and informative.