Afarrar825

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:44, 5 February 2020 (UTC)

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I noticed a few typos and grammatical errors such throughout the paragraph so I would be sure to go back and double check the article before submitting the final draft in the future. You do a great job of explaining Hawaiian art and what types of media is consists of, however some of the wording of certain sentences tends to get a little repetitive, especially towards the end, and I would also to be sure to specify what part of the article you are working on (intro, timeline, artists, etc…)

Laurenk17 (talk) 00:59, 10 March 2020 (UTC)

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	Hey, great response. I think the way you sourced your article could have been better. I wish there were more bolded links in your article that took me to other Wikipedia pages about the other small topics in your article. (ie Painting, photography, sculptures) Jaharialayeart (talk) 20:11, 16 March 2020 (UTC)

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	your contribution does not sound credible. Using words like "many" diminishes the credibility of your posts. And there are not any bold articles in your post that are specific to Hawaiian art or culture. Those two things would greatly improve the credibility of your article posts. Jaharialayeart (talk) 20:59, 16 March 2020 (UTC)

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	Very good work, your information is very detailed, and grammatically correct. Just make sure you add the sources you used in your references, and there are a few errors in "Pacfic" a missing period after "artists" and after "include" the colon is missing. Mariamelia Zaragoza (talk) 22:45, 22 March 2020 (UTC)

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I think that this information is a very good start! For the sources that you have listed Wiki will add them in the correct format under the cite tab in the sandbox. It also will add it to the bibliography. Adellert (talk) 02:06, 23 March 2020 (UTC)

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Hello! I really enjoyed what you had to say about your topic. However, it seemed to me that you did not have any links to add so that way people know what website you used when researching your topic. All that was used for sourcing was (Name.Date) which is helpful to know that you are citing someone, just maybe add the link so they know where you go the source from.

ChloeM99 (talk) 20:54, 23 March 2020 (UTC)

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HI there! Love all the information on Hawaiian art and how It came to be. I would incorporate your sources into the text. Crf figuerjm (talk) 01:09, 25 March 2020 (UTC)