Talk:K-Quarantine

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Latest comment: 3 years ago by Light&highbeautyforever in topic Copy edit

The article would be improved when it contains limitations of 'K-Quarantine'. This version on 16 July 2021 is likely propaganda in favor of the government. The article is actually about the strategy to Covid-19 in South Korea, not 'K-Quarantine'. Most of the content should be moved to a section in 'https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/COVID-19_pandemic_in_South_Korea'. This article should be minimized to describe just the origin of the word, 'K-Quarantine', and the statistics for using this word by the press and preference in public people. The section 'outreach campaign' as well as 'thank-you challenge' is not related to this topic and should be removed.

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Hello, I'm leaving feedback for deadline 6. Since it was made in the sandbox, it seemed like the first document you made, but at first, I was surprised that there were so many contents and it was well organized. But to give you a few feeds, the first is one of the feedback I got from the professor, and the reference is mostly dependent on newspaper articles. The professor gave me feedback that it would be good to use academic materials as references. The second is that I want each subheadings to be numbered within the history section. Of course, it's good now, but I thought it would be easier to read if it was divided into numbers. Lastly, I hope that the content in the result section will be more abundant. That's it. I hope we can all do well on Wikipedia! CHOI JAEMIN EggSushi (talk) 11:30, 8 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

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This was flagged for a copy edit so I am going to take a look. Light&highbeautyforever (talk) 22:32, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply

Done with the copy edit but I found some incorrect information, so I'm moving this to my sandbox to look over the sources. Please leave suggestions here. Thanks. Light&highbeautyforever (talk) 16:39, 25 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
Forgot to come back and mark this as finished when I updated--I'm done with it for now. Light&highbeautyforever (talk) 12:53, 7 February 2021 (UTC)Reply