What I added to the logos article: Logos tries to persuade an audience using logical arguments and supportive evidence. Logos is a persuasive technique often used in writing and rhetoric. Edits in Gender Equality article: I added other forms of sexual assault. The article mentioned marital rape, but failed to mention date rape and rape by drugs and alcohol. I noticed that it was difficult to find mistakes in the "Gender Equality" article because it was well-written. It used academic language that helped establish its credibility. However, it had many factual claims, but because they were cited an audience may accept them to be true instead of checking them. The article discussed the role of logos in Christianity. This should be a separate article because this distracted me from the core meaning of logos. All the citations seem accurate and all of the ones I checked have non biased academic information. Many of the citations are outdated; some more recent information should be added.
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