User talk:Cookiestan/sandbox
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Bebelong
Hi, this is bebelong! Below is my peer review.
Overall, it is in a very good shape with good structure. The very last section of Ireland can be expanded to explain more about the relationship between Britain and Ireland. Some of the terms inside the South Africa section can have clearer explanations. And the bullet point section in Switzerland is rather confusing for me to understand, I am not sure if it is more about the phrasing or the general information. All the sections are well-organized! If there is more information, you can potentially add sub-sections to make each section more specific. Great Job! I look forward to a more detailed article! Bebelong (talk) 23:47, 13 April 2017 (UTC)