Darceyguffey Peer Review

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Hi Darceyguffy!

I just finished reading your article of Hong Kong english and I felt like it was really good. It flowed nicely and you had a lot of information to read. You also broke down the constant really nicely too. If I was to add anything I would recommend a chart of the tdevoicing of final constants, still keep the list but a small chart would be a nice addition. And lastly the number section was a bit confusing to me, ( but that could also be that I suck at mathematics so who knows ) So maybe a more broken down explaniation of how the numbers are related to the language, and I think you will be good to go! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mcshifrin (talkcontribs) 07:13, 26 March 2018 (UTC)Reply