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Para 3 is problematic. Pekarangan is an inseparable part of cultures and social lives around Indonesia as well. Pekarangan owners in Java have incorporated the rukun wisdom into their pekarangan usages, making pekarangan as a platform of social interaction and provider of ceremonial needs. Meanwhile, the Balinese adapted the tri-hita-karana wisdom to their pekarangan, as well as the Madurese with the bappa, babbhu, guru, rato wisdom of courtesy. — Several unexplained or red-linked Indonesian words, you present opinions as facts an inseparable part of cultures... a platform of social interaction and provider of ceremonial needs. Philosophy would be a less value-laden word than 'wisdom Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:20, 4 August 2019 (UTC)

@Jimfbleak - thank you for noticing that - sorry for the late response. I've changed the paragraph to make it more understandable. :) Dhio-270599 11:54, 12 August 2019 (UTC)