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  What are the advantages of philanthropeneurship over traditional philanthropy

“Provide critic's opinion of incorporating entrepreneurial (what belongs here?)”

Overall it looks like it’s well put together and will include neutral information. As I said before it might be useful to add what this offers over traditional philanthropy.  Melissa F (talk) 17:06, 14 October 2016 (UTC)

Article is very good at explaining the opinions of people towards the topic, and explains the term Philanthropreneur well. I would add more examples of philanthropreneurship in action, perhaps in the opening paragraph to help readers' understanding of the term. Howley.l (talk) 17:20, 19 October 2016 (UTC)

I would add more to the section on the critiques of this concept. Perhaps add some examples. In addition, I like your sections so far, they are really thorough and well thought out. It might be interesting to analyze this concept through a philosophical lens (liberalism, conservatism, Marxism). Also don't forget to add citations for your information. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Melissa F (talk • contribs) 16:41, 21 October 2016 (UTC)