Talk:Katia Bertoldi
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Latest comment: 4 years ago by Elysia (Wiki Ed) in topic Feedback
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This is a page to highlight the achievements of Prof. Bertoldi as part of the APS Wiki Scientist course to highlight the large achevements of underrepresented and/or non-traditional STEM leaders.
With approximately 500 million views a month, Wikipedia is one of the most popular and best-known websites in the world. However, fewer than 18% of the biographies on the site are about women[1].
Please feel free to update with references and/or updated information as needed.
References
- ^ "Biographies of Women and Minority Physicists". Wiki Scientist Course. APS. Retrieved 2 June 2020.
Feedback
editHi Junip5r, here are some thoughts about your sandbox:
- Just part of the Wikipedia style guide, but citations directly follow punctuation, including commas, periods, and semicolons (Sentence.[1] not Sentence[1]. or Sentence. [1]) I see a couple instances to fix—you can just drag and drop the references to move them where they need to go.
- In general, all content on Wikipedia should be referenced. If consecutive sentences come from the same source, the citation can be added once at the end of the consecutive sentences rather than duplicated at the end of each sentence. In that vein, no paragraph should end without a citation, and no paragraphs should lack citations. I see several paragraphs that lack citations, which is a red flag. Where does this content come from? How will the reader know it's verifiable?
Once you've added some more citations to "Early life and education" and "Career", I think you will be ready to move this out of your sandbox! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:53, 2 June 2020 (UTC)