Wikipedia:Featured picture candidates/File:Animal mitochondrion diagram en.svg

Animal Mitochondrion

Original - A cross section of the mitochondrion of an animal cell.

Edit - "Inter membrane space" to "Intermembrane space"; web-safe fonts.

Reason: Another excellent illustration. I'm not afraid to say that I am partial to illustrations, especially well made, high EV ones such as this. Look at the articles this is in, and prominently in for that.
Articles this image appears in: Intermembrane space of mitochondria, Intermembrane space, Mitochondrial myopathy, Molecular anthropology, and Mitochondrion
Creator: LadyofHats

Support as nominator -- Nezzadar ☎ 02:27, 20 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose original. Irregular capitalisation, no references for diagram (and some of those terms look dubious - inter membrane space is more likely Intermembrane space), image page needs English description for en:wiki. --jjron (talk) 07:36, 20 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Sorry, there does appear to be references (missed them before - they were hiding down in the 'source'). Other reasons still stand. FWIW, I also find it too cramped at the edges - could do with some margins. --jjron (talk) 12:18, 20 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  - Translated. I think I've covered everything. Zoo Fari 03:26, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    - Neutral on edit. Still too cramped at the edges for me and doesn't really sell me as an FP, but as long as the errors are fixed. --jjron (talk) 13:15, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
      - For the purpose it serves, the cropping isn't as much of an issue. It is a diagram to aid in the study and understanding of an extremely small object. It dosen't have to be pretty, just functional. Nezzadar ☎ 14:24, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
        These diagrams can be difficult to judge for FPC IMO. 'It is accurate' can't be good enough, or pretty much any SVG could be run through as an FP once accuracy was clarified, which defeats the purpose of FPC. No, it needs something more in line with the technical merits other images need to achieve. My 'rule of thumb' is "Would I be satisfied if I saw this diagram in a textbook on the subject?". The answer here is 'no' unfortunately, I would expect something better. --jjron (talk) 06:57, 22 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comment Again, LadyofHats is not a native english speaker. If someone wants to edit this, it would be nice. I however, have decided after using Inkscape, not to use inkscape. I could edit it, but it wouldn't be an SVG. Nezzadar ☎ 16:38, 20 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Edit posted. See caption for changes. Zoo Fari 02:15, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comment - First, shouldn't "cristae" be capitalized? And for the sake of EV, DNA should be spelled out. If anyone agrees, I'll make the changes. Zoo Fari 02:14, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Update I have asked for help in the Wikipedia image labs, and specifically ZooFari. I am awaiting an answer from them. Nezzadar ☎ 02:55, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Who apparently already did it. Wow. I should have read that closer first. As I said, I need to stop editing late at night... Nezzadar ☎ 02:57, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Asked him to implement the changes he suggested. ZooFari is soooo getting a barnstar for this quick save. Nezzadar ☎ 02:59, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done - Spelled out DNA and capitalized "Cristae". Zoo Fari 03:21, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Support - Ironed the wrinkles and everything appears to be in shape. Zoo Fari 03:26, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Update The edited image has been swapped out in the articles. Nezzadar ☎ 04:18, 21 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comment What are those free-floating enormous ATP synthases? Doesn't seem right. Narayanese (talk) 05:51, 22 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Not promoted --Makeemlighter (talk) 15:54, 27 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]