Wikipedia:Peer review/Microsoft Windows/archive1

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I think it needs general review.

Thanks, Kozuch (talk) 12:21, 13 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
  • Deal with the top tag - citations needed.
  • ONE (1)! paragraph (and a short one) for the lead? Check out WP:LEAD. I'd expect at least three, maybe four large paras here.
  • Image captions which are fragments shouldn't have periods.
  • Fair use rationale needed for ALL fair use images.
  • Deal with the [citation needed]'s. There are many.
  • "Long File Names"? This is English, not German, so remove those caps!
  • "Hybrid 16/32-bit operating systems" section unreferenced completely.
  • "64-bit operating systems" also.
  • Remove spaces between citations, per WP:CITE.
  • Avoid in-line citations as there are in the History section.
  • Timeline of releases section is unreferenced.

Basically, cutting a short story shorter, this needs work on prose, citation, WP:MOS and is well short of WP:GA. Work out the basics and then come back to PR (one article at a time) and you never know, GA may be a breeze. Good luck. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:49, 19 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]