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12:16:37, 22 December 2019 review of draft by Vanrumbeke

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Hello,

This article is not an advertisment. What can I change to make this article meet the requirements? I based the article on the Fanki piling system article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Franki_piling_system Links and references to official institutions were also added.

Thank you

Vanrumbeke (talk) 12:16, 22 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Vanrumbeke, I would recommend at least one more source, preferably more. You should also to make sure that the writing is neutral, and from an encyclopedic perspective. The Franki pile article is not particularly good. I'm afraid that I can't really hold up an example of a good pile article. But really you just need to make sure that the writing is not overly casual, and presents facts without trying to convince the reader of something. The main reason it looks like an ad is because the main source is from the company that created it, and it seems to be more of a fact sheet of numbers rather than an encyclopedia article. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 23:03, 22 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

18:19:14, 22 December 2019 review of draft by Brittvansloun

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Brittvansloun (talk) 18:19, 22 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Brittvansloun, Not quite sure what your issue/question is? Could you perhaps elaborate on how we can help you? Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 22:56, 22 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

20:50:13, 22 December 2019 review of submission by TabBytes

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Hello moderator, I have added more references to the article. please review it. Thanks TabBytes (talk) 20:50, 22 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

TabBytes, Of the three refs, two are from the company being covered. That means they are not independent. Please find at least 3, and preferably more, reliable and independent sources. Also, the draft is written like a promotional puff piece, or an advertisement. Write it from a neutral point of view. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 22:54, 22 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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