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edit05:08:38, 10 November 2019 review of submission by 27.34.104.217
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27.34.104.217 (talk) 05:08, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi sir, I am new here but I have been involved media sector so nice 2009 and I have some references too, please help me to have Wikipedia page.
09:15:43, 10 November 2019 review of draft by 117.242.63.174
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how to change the headline of topic
117.242.63.174 (talk) 09:15, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
- Article has been accepted with the title corrected to Kazi Kundli, Thanks for helping improve Wikipedia. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 09:37, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
10:59:20, 10 November 2019 review of submission by 2A02:587:D1A:AC00:AD4F:F880:3B11:4CF1
editThe founder of the academy is perhaps part of Indias squash history. Also this project the Academy which is his brainchild and pet project is very unique and probably the only one of its kind which is self funded and is also a social engineering project. The rejection hence requires a review. 2A02:587:D1A:AC00:AD4F:F880:3B11:4CF1 (talk) 10:59, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
13:36:55, 10 November 2019 review of draft by Drjaitley
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This individual has been a prominent figure in the United States and India in the era when social media or online news articles weren't introduced. But, still, I have finally found an ONLINE news article that shows his entire interview given to The Tribune (https://www.tribuneindia.com/2000/20000913/cth1.htm , scroll down to find Dr.Jaitley's Interview). Also, through the gallery on Dr.Jaitley's website (https://drjaitley.net/), it's evident to anyone as to who he is. Online evidence/supporting material is limited, but if you'd like for me to attach snapshots of his news coverage and interviews from renowned newspapers, I'm definitely looking forward to it. Looking forward to the appropriate guidance.
Drjaitley (talk) 13:36, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
13:49:02, 10 November 2019 review of draft by Drjaitley
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You're regarding this as "unsourced" puffery because I don't have any ONLINE sources supporting what has been written. So, kindly suggest ways I should be able to conform to Wikipedia's rules, which can also help me accomplish my goal.
Drjaitley (talk) 13:49, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
- The puffery includes "widely known""continuously aiding" "over fourteen thousand hours of flying time as a commercial pilot." "continued his day and night efforts to strengthen" " strongly facilitated" "relentlessly encouraged" "outstanding commitment and dedicated leadership" " tireless efforts" "inspirational and role mode" "recognized and appreciated" " promoting his greater form of understanding" none of this is sourced and is all promotional puffery, totally inappropriate in tone for an encyclopaedia article. Theroadislong (talk) 14:01, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
14:28:06, 10 November 2019 review of draft by Drjaitley
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Firstly Sir/Ma'am, this is written by myself and ofcourse if these extra phrases, to Wikipedia, seems in any way "puffery" please feel free to do way with them, because my objective is just to be able to make Dr.Jaitley known to a larger audience through Wikipedia. And, this is unequivocally "puffery" because according to Wikipedia it isn't a reliable source, and it will be until it's "proved" otherwise.
And, I have supporting material that indeed proves that all of these are true, but unfortunately, they're not online-based. So, again, I'm asking you Sir/Ma'am, how should I be able to submit them? I look forward to your guidance.
Drjaitley (talk) 14:28, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
I want to know, in the first place, that if Wikipedia accepts non-online-based sources.
How should I submit them? The online sources I have are not reliable and sufficient. I have several news articles covering this individual I'm trying to create a Wikipedia page for. Kindly provide guidance.
Drjaitley (talk) 15:25, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
16:01:37, 10 November 2019 review of submission by Wikiabc123wiki
editHello, I have made the necessary adjustments to the reason why it was rejected primarily; sources. There are very notable and reliable sources now as you can see. The Inan Family has become a big name in Turkey and should have a page dedicated to them. There is no reason why the page should be rejected again, since there are several accurate sources and the page is now ready for publication. Thank you for your help. Wikiabc123wiki (talk) 16:01, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
17:35:52, 10 November 2019 review of draft by Electra Roberts
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Hello, I have created this page for Yiannis Papadopoulos, and I've been waiting 7 months for a re-review. Since then, I took away any unreliable sources, I used many new sources that can be verified, and I added info to make the page up to date. I believe the page is in great standing, I'm not asking for a faster review, I just need to know if there's sth else to correct regarding the article or anything I can do to make it even better.
Electra Roberts (talk) 17:35, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
18:53:36, 10 November 2019 review of draft by DarcieNicoleII
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DarcieNicoleII (talk) 18:53, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
The person I am trying to post an article about is a celebrity. I have provided additional proof that he was in Billboard Magazine on the national music charts and have cited several references where he is credited on albums of other artists and mentioned as key personnel - on their independent Wikipedia pages. I have also provided the fact that he is listed in the EMI/Capitol/Manhattan Records Wikipedia page as an artist who was signed to him. Please publish this article. This person is a celebrity who was part of very historical projects in Urban music in America.