Draft:2024 Robert F. Kennedy Jr. vice presidential candidate selection

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Declined by Grahaml35 7 months ago. Last edited by DukeOfDelTaco 3 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: As the article sits it is mostly a list and two sentences using two sources. It currently reads as a news article with no in-depth coverage. Grahaml35 (talk) 03:20, 6 April 2024 (UTC)

This article lists running mates considered by Robert F. Kennedy Jr. during his 2024 independent candidacy for President of the United States. On March 26, 2024, his campaign announced that attorney Nicole Shananan would serve as his running mate, so that Kennedy could qualify for the ballot in several states.^[1]