Draft:Carlos Botelho

Submission declined on 4 October 2024 by Timtrent (talk).

I am seeing two articles in one, here. Botelho is likely a pass for WP:NPOLITICIAN. It could be accepted on that basis if it were not for the section "Japanese Immigration to Brazil" which seems to merit a second article, each referring to the other. I'm pushing this back to you for further thought. I think you can make more of this

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Declined by Timtrent 9 hours ago. Last edited by Babysharkboss2 2 seconds ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Carlos Botelho (14 May 1855 - 20 March 1947), also known as Carlos José de Arruda Botelho, was a Brazilian politician.

Early life

Botelho was born in Piracicaba on May 14, 1855 to Conde do Pinhal and Francisca Teodora Coelho.^[1] His father was a Brazilian federal deputy.^[2]

Political career

He served as the Secretary of Agriculture of São Paulo and later as a Senator of the Republic. He has been called "the Patron Saint of Japanese Immigration in Brazil" for having signed the contract for the arrival of the first Japanese immigrants to Brazil in 1908 during the government of Jorge Tibiriçá.^[3]

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^ "Carlos Botelho". www.wikidata.org. Retrieved 2024-10-04.
^ "Conde do Pinhal". www.wikidata.org. Retrieved 2024-10-04.
^ "Sobre o Parque | Parque Carlos Botelho - Sistema Ambiental Paulista - Governo de SP". Carlos Botelho State Park. 2016-12-30. Archived from the original on 2016-12-30. Retrieved 2024-10-04.

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[1] "Carlos Botelho". www.wikidata.org. Retrieved 2024-10-04.

[2] "Conde do Pinhal". www.wikidata.org. Retrieved 2024-10-04.

[3] "Sobre o Parque | Parque Carlos Botelho - Sistema Ambiental Paulista - Governo de SP". Carlos Botelho State Park. 2016-12-30. Archived from the original on 2016-12-30. Retrieved 2024-10-04.

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