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Comment: Review WP:REFB for assistance in understanding proper referencing style. microbiologyMarcus ^{[petri dish·growths]} 18:07, 11 April 2024 (UTC)

Desert Storm Film

Desert Storm is a 2017 South African Survival war film, written, produced and directed by Kevin Singh. The Director of Photography was Farren Singh and it was co written by Avon Singh. It is set in Texas in 1985 and Iraq in 1991.^[1]

Plot

Two best friends are pitted against each other when a new girl comes to town, matters are further complicated when they enlist together in the U S Army to fight in the Persian Gulf War, the men and their unit captured by Iraqi forces and must work together with other prisoners of war to escape Operation Desert Storm.^[2]

Cast

Monré Aucamp as John Mcdaniels
Proetic as Danny Hooper
Gerald Copeland as Matthew Trillo
Sarah Kozlowski as Hope Fowler
Joseph Jones Umba as Jake Long
Marco Alvaro Truter as Poodle
Edwin Gagiano as Ryan Temple
Kyle Ryan Diffenthal as Frank Donaldson
Ria Kotze as John's mom

Production

With a $13 000 budget, Filming began late September 2015 for a week the Texas scenes, then a month later they shot in a desert reserve in the Northern Cape.

References

^ "Thirst". IMDb.
^ "Thirst Review". 8 July 2017.

External links

https://www.imdb.com/title/tt6683070

[1] "Thirst". IMDb.

[2] "Thirst Review". 8 July 2017.

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