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Eley Hawk Ltd is a British manufacturer of shotgun cartridges, established in 1828. The company specializes in producing ammunition for game shooting and clay target sports. Eley Hawk operates independently from Eley Limited, following a split of the original Eley Brothers company.

History

Eley Hawk originated from Eley Brothers, a company founded in 1828 by William and Charles Eley. The brothers initially produced percussion caps for firearms, an innovation that improved firearm reliability. While experimenting with an enhanced percussion cap design, William Eley tragically died in an accidental explosion. Despite this early setback, the company continued to grow, producing various types of ammunition throughout the 19th and 20th centuries.

In the mid-20th century, the company split into two entities: Eley Limited, which focused on rifle ammunition, and Eley Hawk Ltd, which specialized in shotgun cartridges. Eley Hawk is noted for its environmentally conscious developments, including the introduction of biodegradable wads in its cartridges.

Recent Developments

Eley Hawk continues to innovate in the shotgun cartridge industry, with a product range tailored for competitive and recreational shooting. The company sponsors athletes, including Amber Rutter, who won a silver medal at the Paris Olympics in 2024.^[1]

Product Range

The company manufactures a variety of shotgun cartridges for different shooting disciplines, including game and clay shooting. Eley Hawk has introduced eco-friendly ammunition, reflecting broader trends toward sustainability in the shooting community.

Legacy and Innovation

Eley Hawk Ltd continues its long-standing tradition of innovation in shotgun cartridge production, contributing to the evolution of shooting sports. It maintains a significant role in both competitive and recreational shooting.

References

"Eley Hawk Ltd - A History of Innovative Excellence", Scribehound.
Official Eley Hawk Website
"Amber Rutter shoots her way to silver". BASC. 2024.
"Eley Hawk History", A.W. Rule and Son Gunmakers.

^ "Amber Rutter shoots her way to silver". BASC. 2024.

[1] "Amber Rutter shoots her way to silver". BASC. 2024.

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