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Comment: Your references do not verify that Gama passes WP:BIO. One even refuses to open. AT least one is not about Gama 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 21:03, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: "associated with witchcraft.[1][2][3] [4][5][6]" is a prime example of WP:CITEKILL. Instead we need one excellent reference per fact asserted. If you are sure it is beneficial, two, and at an absolute maximum, three. Three is not a target, it's a limit. Aim for one. A fact you assert, once verified in a reliable source, is verified. More is gilding the lily. Please choose the very best in each case of multiple referencing for a single point and either drop or repurpose the remainder.Your references should be for the facts you present, not a long list at the end 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 22:31, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
Mphatsi Jim Gama | |
|---|---|
| Governor of Ludzidzini Royal Village | |
| In office 2001–2011 | |
| Succeeded by | Lusendvo Fakudze[1] |
| Personal details | |
| Born | Jim Gama |
| Citizenship | eSwatini |
Jim Gama, also called 'Mbhokane', was a traditional prime minister of the Kingdom of eSwatini, radio talk host[2]and governor of Ludzidzini Royal Village[3] - the official home of the Dlamini royals.[4][5] He served in this post from 2001 until he died in 2011. Gama worked for the popular radio show called Khala Mdumbadumbane with Bongani ‘Sigcokosiyancinca’ Dlamini, answering letters from listeners who sought traditional solutions on thier marital problems[6][2]. He died at a South African hospital in March 2011 after battling an illness for several years,[7] an illness which he associated with witchcraft.[8]
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edit- ^ Ludzidzini governor is exposed, Swaziland News
- ^ a b African monarchy sparks debate over AIDS and sex, Wall Street Journal, 20 December 2006. Retrieved on 23 July 2024
- ^ [Swazi king summons citizens for national indaba, Mail and Guardian, 10 June 2008. Access on 1 August 2024
- ^ Patricks, Richard M. (July 2000). "Cultural Resources – Swazi Culture – The Umhlanga or Reed Dance". SNTC website. Swaziland National Trust Commission. Retrieved 1 August 2024.
- ^ "Umhlanga / Reed Dance". STA website. Swaziland Tourism Authority. Archived from the original on 6 January 2007. Retrieved 1 August 2024.
- ^ Sigcokosiyancinca dies of Covid-19, The Swaziland News, 20 August 2021. Accessed on 1 August 2024
- ^ Gama, enemy of Swazi freedom dies, Swazi Media, 16 March 2011. Retrieved 23 July 2024
- ^ Mbhokane says his sickness is traditional, Times of Swaziland, 16 August 2010. Page 1