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Submission declined on 24 July 2023 by Ca (talk). This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia. Declined by Ca 15 months ago. |
Submission declined on 15 July 2023 by Ca (talk). This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia. Declined by Ca 15 months ago. |
Submission declined on 25 June 2023 by Ca (talk). This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia. Declined by Ca 16 months ago. |
- Comment: still fails GNG microbiologyMarcus (petri dish) 15:36, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: Thank you for fixing the citation error. However, this draft in its current state does not establish notability. Please read WP:SIGCOV carefully. The Newspaper archive is a advertisement so it is not independent. (keyword: "paid for")Please find sources that give detailed biography of this politician. I will not be reviewing this draft any longer since it is good to get perspective from other reviewers as well. Ca talk to me! 16:18, 24 July 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: The issue is that the current sources lack details about Mr. Kiramis. Most simply announce his mayoral status and nothing else. Many are just passing mentions. Also, California Digital Newspaper Collection seems leads me to the search page, not the newspaper itself.Also I don't know what this part is trying to communicate. I suggest editing this part to be coherent. "Bay Area viewed as a part of Silicon Valley. Kiramis and Rick Wykoff were the council members who were adamant that the Solarbees should be removed as soon as possible." Ca talk to me! 10:57, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: The Antelope Valley Times does not seem to be a reliable source; there is no mention of fact-checking or editorial team. Also, some of ht einline citations are confusing. For example "Kiramis ran for city council[1] in Foster City, where he was later elected mayor. He then became a candidate for Lancaster[4] city council[1]. " It is unclear what the citations are supporting here. Ca talk to me! 13:53, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
John T Kiramis (born January 19, 1952) is a retired American[1][2] politician[3], ex-mayor,[4][5] police lieutenant[6],detective sergeant [7] of Foster City, San Francisco, California. and raised in a part of the city called Glen Park after retiring as mayor[8] he wrote a book about mayor of San Francisco.[9]
Early Life
editKiramis was born on January 19, 1952, he grew up in Glen Park. Kiramis graduated from Balboa High School in the year 1968,[10] and was named in the Hall of Merit as of October 24 2009.[11] He completed his university degree from University of San Francisco in 1973.[12]
Career
editKiramis is a former police lieutenant[13][14] and detective[15] sergeant who served in law enforcement[13] for thirty-two years.[6] he was reserve officer then he became communications officer in 1974[16] he also work with FBI on a case[7]. Upon retirement from the force, retiring as a police lieutenant in 2004[8], Kiramis took retirement from Estero Municipal Improvement District in the year 2004 after serving them for almost 22 years.[17] Kiramis won a seat on the city council[18][19][20] in 2005[21] and become a councilman.[22][23][24]
Books
edit- The Mayor's Dead, ISBN 979-8849459677
- The Mayor's Dead Pile Up, ISBN 978-1-957547-58-9
Reference
edit- ^ "Antelope Valley Political Observer 1 February 2012 — California Digital Newspaper Collection". cdnc.ucr.edu. Retrieved 2023-07-15.
- ^ "Modesto Bee And News Herald Archives, Sep 17, 1972, p. 10". NewspaperArchive.com. 1972-09-17. Retrieved 2023-08-06.
- ^ "Meet John T. Kiramis, Candidate for Lancaster City Council". The Antelope Valley Times. 2012-02-01. Retrieved 2023-02-18.
- ^ "Herb Perez endorsed by San Mateo Daily Journal". Foster City, CA Patch. 2011-10-17. Retrieved 2023-07-14.
- ^ "Foster City Rollback of Term Limits, Measure W (November 2009)". Ballotpedia. Retrieved 2023-07-27.
- ^ a b "Foster City mayor departs for Southern California". East Bay Times. 2009-09-25. Retrieved 2023-02-18.
- ^ a b "San Mateo Times 21 Jul 1977, San Mateo, California, USA". 1997-02-21.
- ^ a b Silverfarb, Bill (21 September 2009). "Foster City's John Kiramis announces retirement tonight". San Mateo Daily Journal. Retrieved 2023-02-18.
- ^ Inc. Information Publications (2009). California cities, towns & counties 2009. Internet Archive. Woodside, CA : Information Publications. ISBN 978-0-911273-48-9.
- ^ "John Kiramis – Balboa High School CA Class of 1969". www.alumniclass.com. Retrieved 2023-07-14.
- ^ http://www.cifsf.org/uploads/3/0/9/7/30972031/balboa-halloffame.pdf
- ^ "San Mateo Times Newspaper Archives, Jul 4, 1974, p. 26". NewspaperArchive.com. 1974-07-04. Retrieved 2023-08-06.
- ^ a b Staff, J. (2001-11-16). "White powder at temple turns out to be metal polish". J. Retrieved 2023-07-25.
- ^ "J. The Jewish News of Northern California 16 November 2001 — California Digital Newspaper Collection". cdnc.ucr.edu. Retrieved 2023-07-28.
- ^ "San Mateo Times Newspaper Archives, Feb 28, 1977, p. 62". NewspaperArchive.com. 1977-02-28. Retrieved 2023-08-06.
- ^ "San Mateo Times Newspaper Archives, Jul 4, 1974, p. 26". NewspaperArchive.com. 1974-07-04. Retrieved 2023-08-06.
- ^ "John T Kiramis | Transparent California". transparentcalifornia.com. Retrieved 2023-07-14.
- ^ "Foster City City Council Race at a Glance". Foster City, CA Patch. 2011-11-07. Retrieved 2023-07-25.
- ^ "Clearwisdom Weekly". en.minghui.org. Retrieved 2023-07-25.
- ^ "United States: City Council Member Calls for an End to the Chinese Communist Party (CCP) Atrocity of Excising Organs from Living Practitioners". www.tg.clearharmony.net. Retrieved 2023-07-25.
- ^ Staff, Examiner (2007-07-18). "Local residents show interest in city election". San Francisco Examiner. Retrieved 2023-07-27.
- ^ Staff, Examiner (2007-07-18). "Local residents show interest in city election". San Francisco Examiner. Retrieved 2023-07-14.
- ^ "Neighboring levees hold key to flood insurance". uosc.primo.exlibrisgroup.com. Retrieved 2023-07-27.
- ^ "Quest for postal recognition: Online firms' confusion of Foster City with San Mateo offends local pride, official says". uosc.primo.exlibrisgroup.com. Retrieved 2023-07-27.
External links
edit- City County Profiles Episode 11
- Clearwisdom Weekly
- [1]
- United States: City Council Member Calls for an End to the Chinese Communist Party (CCP) Atrocity of Excising Organs from Living Practitioners
- John Kiramis — OfficialUSA.com Records
- [2]
- Patch California Fostercity
- NewsPaper Archives