Draft:Palestinian and Israeli Conflict

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Declined by KylieTastic 51 days ago. Last edited by KylieTastic 51 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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The Israeli and Palestinian war is an ongoing military war happening as of in this moment you're reading this. This war is drawn back to 1948. On May 14, 1948, A state was created, "Israel" which was a land given by the PALESTINIANS, sparking the first Arab war. The war ended in 1949 with Israel's victory, but more than 700,000 thousand Palestinians were displaced, and the territory was divided in 3 parts, the State of Israel, The West bank and the Gaza strip. Israel occupied these territories (Gaza Strip, and the West Bank) Including East Jerusalem, which was then taken over by Israel itself. Coming back to the present, Israel first launched the first bomb on October 7, 2023 (exactly 1 year and 2 days as I'm writing) on Gaza, A major city in Palestine. As of right now, Israel is still bombing Palestine, according to the Palestinian Health Authorities, till now 42,000 people have died, more than 90 thousand people are injured, and 10,000+ are still under the rubble caused by the bombs.