Draft:SWIM (musician)

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Declined by Ktkvtsh 2 months ago. Last edited by Ktkvtsh 2 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: The only source that is acceptable here is abc.net.au. All others need to be removed.
There is an over use of tables. The first table should be an infobox.
The ARIA links all lead to 404 errors. Ktkvtsh (talk) 19:28, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

SWIM is an Australian electronic techno producer, DJ and performer from Melbourne, Australia.^[1] His debut album 'In Circles' was released on 12th April 2024, reaching #1 on the ARIA Australian Dance Albums Charts ^[2] and Vinyl Charts. ^[3]

SWIM
Born	Melbourne, Australia.
Genres	techno electronic dance
Instrument(s)	synthesizer digital audio workstation
Years active	2020–present

Career

SWIM released his debut EP, Somewhere, Somehow in November 2020, and followed this up in 2021 with Years on Years and 11:11 in 2022. He made is Boiler Room debut in October 2023 in Melbourne along side acts such as Marlon Hoffstadt and Miley Serious. ^[4] He released his debut full-length album, "In Circles" on 12th April 2024 reaching #1 on the ARIA Australian Dance Albums Charts ^[2] and Vinyl Charts. ^[3] #4 on the Australian Album Charts ^[5] and #64 on the overall ARIA album charts.

Discography

Studio albums

List of studio albums, with release date and label shown
Title	Album details	Peak chart positions
Title	Album details	AUS
In Circles	Released: 12 April 2024 Label: Self-released Formats: LP, Digital download, streaming	64

Extended plays

List of EPs, with year released and selected details
Title	Details
Somewhere, Somehow	Released: 19 November 2020 Label: Self-released Formats: LP, Digital download, streaming
Years On Years	Released: 26 November 2021 Label: Self-released Formats: CD, Digital download, streaming
11:11	Released: 11 November 2022 Label: Self-released Formats: Digital download, streaming

References

^ "Mix Up: SWIM". triple j. 2022-03-26. Retrieved 2024-04-29.
^ ^a ^b "ARIA Top 10 Australian Dance Albums". www.aria.com.au. Retrieved 2024-04-29.
^ ^a ^b "ARIA Top 20 Vinyl Albums Chart". www.aria.com.au. Retrieved 2024-04-29.
^ "Melbourne | Saturday". BOILER ROOM. Retrieved 2024-04-29.
^ "ARIA Top 20 Australian Albums Chart". www.aria.com.au. Retrieved 2024-04-29.

[1] "Mix Up: SWIM". triple j. 2022-03-26. Retrieved 2024-04-29.

[:0-2] "ARIA Top 10 Australian Dance Albums". www.aria.com.au. Retrieved 2024-04-29.

[:1-3] "ARIA Top 20 Vinyl Albums Chart". www.aria.com.au. Retrieved 2024-04-29.

[4] "Melbourne | Saturday". BOILER ROOM. Retrieved 2024-04-29.

[5] "ARIA Top 20 Australian Albums Chart". www.aria.com.au. Retrieved 2024-04-29.

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