Draft:Sudarshanam Netra Chikitsalayam

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Declined by SwisterTwister 8 years ago. Last edited by Anomalocaris 2 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: See WP:Referencing for beginners, still not enough in-depth third-party sources overall. SwisterTwister talk 05:07, 13 J0anuary 2016 (UTC)

Sudarshanam Netra Chikitsalayam is an Ayurveda Eye Hospital in Thiruvalla Kerala State India started in 1993 for treating non surgical eye ailments in ancient Indian medicine Ayurveda.(Ref.Link 1,2)

Sudarshanam Netra Chikitsalayam was part of a global Documentary film on living Ayurveda practices of India titled 'Ayurveda - art of being'(appears from 13 min 30 sec.- ) by Pan Nalin Productions Germany(Ref.Link 4 & a documentary titled 'Mutant Bees' by Monalisa Productions France depicts Honey therapy carried out at Sudarshanam Netra Chikitsalayam for eye ailments) (Ref. Link 5)

Dr.B.G.Gokulan Chief Physician & Founder of Sudarshanam Netra Chikitsalayam was Guru(Master) in Netra Chikitsa(Ayurveda Ophthalmology)in Rashtriya Ayurveda Vidyapeeth,an autonomous body under Department of AYUSH, Government of India in 2010(Ref.Link 3 page 2).

References

http://www.thehindu.com/2004/03/23/st0ories/2004032303360500.htm

http://www.thehindu.com/todays-paper/tp-national/tp-kerala/taking-good-care-of-ones-eyes/article151356.ece

http://ravdelhi.nic.in/writereaddata/linkimages/2971891401.pdf

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pan_Nalin

http://videotheque.cnrs.fr/doc=1107?langue=EN