Draft:The Female General and The Eldest Princess

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Declined by Chaotic Enby 28 minutes ago. Last edited by Whpq 20 seconds ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: Reads more like an ad for the novel than an encyclopedia article ("You can read it online or buy it Here is the online version"). Also, the references don't show up at all. Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 17:47, 1 October 2024 (UTC)

The Female General and The Eldest Princess

This is a book written by the chinese author Please Don't Laugh (请君莫笑, Qǐng Jūn Mò Xiào),[1]

also known as PDL or QJMX, is a Chinese web novel author. She has written multiple novels, six of which are complete and one which is still on-going; Clear and Muddy Loss of Love[2] and Female General And Eldest Princess being the most well known of her works.

Main Characters: [4] Lin Wanyue (16) 林挽月 Female general living under the identity of Lin Feixing 林飞星 (her deceased twin brother) Li Xian (16) 李娴 Eldest Princess of Kingdom Li Legitimate daughter of the Emperor. Sister of Crown Prince Li Zhu 李珠 Side characters Li Zhao (40+)李钊 Title: Emperor

Li Qingcheng (40+)李倾城 Title: Empress

Other characters [5] ( there is a list of all charackters mentioned in the book) Other information about the book Genres Fantasy Lesbian Historical Fiction LGBT Romance Ancient China Age indication : adolescent