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Submission declined on 23 January 2024 by Paul W (talk).
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Comment: Subject may be notable (see WP:NPROF) but there are insufficient citations showing significant coverage in reliable, independent, secondary sources (see WP:RS) - too much of the currently cited material is sourced from employing institutions associated with the subject). Tone is too much like a resume or Linkedin profile. Paul W (talk) 21:31, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
Comment: Needs to be still more neutral and factual in tone: "instrumental in establishing...", "meticulously analysed", "prominently featured" – whose words are all these peacock terms?Also, this reads like a CV/resume. We don't need to know every single training course he's been on, or every minor award he's received. Focus on the things that make him notable. DoubleGrazing (talk) 09:01, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
Comment: Suggested improvements:1. The use of tables is not per MOS, please turn into lists instead.2. Remove all external links from body text. With the exception of one optional link in the infobox, there should be no external links before the 'References' section.3. Remove boldface from the 'Awards' section. Bold should not be used to highlight items.4. Section headings should be in *Sentence case*, not *Title Case*.-- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:52, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
Comment: I'm not sure if this passes NACADEMIC or not but the tone needs to be more neutral. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:38, 29 November 2023 (UTC)
Professor in India and chief of Poison Control Centre at AIMS
Dr VV Pillay is Chief of Poison Control Centre of AIMS Cochin
Pillay presently holds the role of Chief at the Poison Control Centre & Clinical Forensic Unit, concurrently serving as the position of Professor & Head of Forensic Medicine and Medical Toxicology at Amrita School of Medicine (Amrita Vishwa Vidyapeetham), Cochin.[1][2][3][4] The Poison Control Centre is acknowledged by the World Health Organization (WHO) and is featured in the Yellow Tox Directory on the WHO website.[1] The Analytical Toxicology Laboratory affiliated with the Poison Control Centre is accredited by the National Accreditation Board for Laboratories (NABL).[1][5]
Speaking at a conference of Indian Society of Toxicology
Pillay has authored scholarly work, comprising publications featured in national and international scientific journals.[2] 20 of these publications are indexed in PUBMED, and 35 are listed in SCOPUS.[2] His editorial contributions include serving as the editor of the Journal of Indian Society of Toxicology from 2005 to 2014. He has been a referee in toxicology for journals such as the Journal of Association of Physicians of India and National Medical Journal of India.[1][2][3][4]
Pillay's research includes the assessment of pesticide and heavy metal contamination in vegetables and fruits within Kerala; on evaluating the heavy metal contamination in rivers and lakes within industrial regions of Kerala and the development of cost-effective and precise diagnostic analytical methods for detecting poisons in the body fluids of poisoned victims.[6] He has been involved in formulating national protocols for the management of various common poisonings encountered in India and for the management of snakebite envenomation.[6]
Pillay has contributed to the field as the author and editor of textbooks, which are utilised as primary educational materials in medical institutions across India.[7]. Few are as follows:
Pillay is invited to speak on current topics within forensic medicine and toxicology, both in India and internationally. Throughout his 30-year career, he has delivered more than 200 invited lectures.[2]
In 2021, Dr Pillay received Lifetime Achievement Award in Toxicology.Lifetime Achievement Award for Contribution to Medical Toxicology in India - 2021[2]
Awarded by the Indian Society of Toxicology at their 15th annual national conference in Madurai, Tamil Nadu[2]
Fellowship of the Indian Congress of Forensic Medicine and Toxicology - 2007[2][8]
Awarded in the 8th Annual Conference of Indian Congress of Forensic Medicine & Toxicology, JN Medical College, Belgaum, Karnataka.[8]
Scroll of Honour from Goa Medical College for 'Dedicated Teaching Service' - 2014[1][2]
VR Joshi JAPI Outstanding Best Referee Award - 2006[8]
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Comment: Subject may be notable (see WP:NPROF) but there are insufficient citations showing significant coverage in reliable, independent, secondary sources (see WP:RS) - too much of the currently cited material is sourced from employing institutions associated with the subject). Tone is too much like a resume or Linkedin profile. Paul W (talk) 21:31, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
